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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2008 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

"For each city and each heart beat and for each guy that fades to the lore of faded t-shirts she never gave back, she reminds herself there’ll just be another in a succession to take its place."

This was a beautiful look at Karen's past and ties in so perfectly with what we knew of her. Great job.



Author's Response: Thank you! We never really knew much about her past so it's always interesting for me to see what it could have been.

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2008 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was gorgeous.  So evocative and true and I really felt the gut punch by the commendations and wooden box line.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've always had the feeling that Karen has some painful pieces to her past that we never saw.

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