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Reviewer: wendolf Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2008 07:40 am Title: I know I look pale but, seriously, I'm fine.

Okay, Stablergirl . . . you've got me hooked!!! Keep it coming! I love how Jim wants to be more Jim-like, that he is something more inside than he gives himself credit for. So interesting. Great job.

Author's Response: lol I love having people hooked! Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I love Jim wanting to be Jim too ;-) Who doesn't love that?

Reviewer: wendolf Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2008 07:24 am Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

I really like this! That Pam . . . me thinks she protesteth too much ;-) Off to read Chapter 2... Great job!

Author's Response: ah ha, definitely too much protestething ;-) thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: PrettyBlueDress Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2008 06:41 am Title: I know I look pale but, seriously, I'm fine.

I am really enjoying this. It's a very refreshing break from our "JAM". I can see this as a Jim and Pam/John and Jenna parallel. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: yeah it kind of is a Jam/John Jenna parallel I guess, except it's still jam they're just acting kind of like john and jenna and...see this is where my own story starts to confuse me... ;-)

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2008 06:28 am Title: I know I look pale but, seriously, I'm fine.

sooo good...kinda weird, but good (and fyi...yes i am a As The World Turns fan, but it is filmed in NYC)...can't wait for more

Author's Response:

ugh fantastic to know!  Thank you I'm changing that right now ;-)

Reviewer: Catie9 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2008 05:53 am Title: I know I look pale but, seriously, I'm fine.

Yes...very interesting! I'm really enjoying the way this is shaping up! And what a surprise to wake up on this gray Monday morning with not one but two chapters waiting for me! Weeee! Awesome, SG, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh, and I totally love the way Jim takes out his frustrations on Pam. That combined w/ the passionate way she "hates" him are going to combine for a very potent explosion...

Author's Response: haha happy st.patrick's day, I guess, two new chapters! ;-)  Yeah I love the self-destructing going on, so addictive.  I'm off to write more right now, lol.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2008 05:37 am Title: I know I look pale but, seriously, I'm fine.

Most definitely hooked now, stablergirl. 

Author's Response: yesssss

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 10:02 pm Title: Pour me another one cause I'm feeling kind of sick.

Yes, I really want to hear Jim's POV! I am lovin' this, because even though it's a totally different kindof tension than usual, I really sense the sexual tension between J & P. Look forward to more!

Author's Response: yep the sexual tension is definitely there.  ;-) Thanks for reading and definitely thanks for looking forward to more, that's always awesome.

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 09:20 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

God, I love when genius procrastinates like this!!


Author's Response: lol.  thanks for reading and reviewing ;-)

Reviewer: elly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 08:54 pm Title: Pour me another one cause I'm feeling kind of sick.

Stay cool, ma babies,” Michael croons, sitting down next to Toby who hands him a beer. Loved the Conan reference! This story has me hooked and I'm anxiously awaiting your updates!

Author's Response: lol yes i'm so glad you got the conan there!! I had it explained in my original version of this chapter and took it down because I wanted to see if anybody would figure it out and mention it! That's you!! lol thanks.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 08:17 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

Not weird at all, just a different take on our 2 favorite characters! I'm hooked, can't wait to see what's next.



Author's Response: thanks! Glad you're reading and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: katiej Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 08:15 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

I LOVE THIS. There's nothing else to say; it's just awesome.

Author's Response: wow thank you! Glad you're on this kind of confusing but still really good journey with me ;-)

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 06:43 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

I LOVE IT!  Keep the hostility going for a while!

Author's Response: lol yes because who doesn't love hostility?! I definitely do, clearly.  ;-)   We don't get to see these two be hostile very often.

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 06:08 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

Despite your warnings, I actually really liked this. It's fresh take on another aspect of the show. I can't wait to see where your taking this!



Author's Response: lol despite my warnings.  I have such self depricating chapter notes, don't I? God, I need to work on that.  lol.  anyway thanks so much for reviewing this one! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 06:01 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

I read this because I was intrigued by the summary and once I started I was completely drawn in. It is a very interesting concept to write about.
I can't wait to see what happens next. Jim's POV, maybe a few more reveals on the other "actors" from the POV of Jim and Pam.



Author's Response: hmm ;-)  yes and yes.  thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 05:51 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

Yes, very weird.  But I like it.  And you know they couldn't hate each other for long -- they're too damn cute.

Author's Response: they ARE too damn cute.  Glad you like this despite its weirdness, lisahoo!  That's always a great compliment ;-)

Reviewer: Mirielle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 05:33 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

Love the idea... so different. Can't wait for an update!

M

Author's Response:

different is good! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: IzzyEmme Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 05:19 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

Ok-- I am in love with this story. I love the idea of AU Pam and Jim actors hating each other's guts outwardly while being attracted inwardly. Please put more up soon--- I don't care what other stories you're working on! I mean, I do b/c they're awesome, but still-- more please.

Author's Response: lol thanks I love th idea too, which is strange I guess but I just can't help myself.  ;-)  thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Athena Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 05:11 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

Oh! I just love this idea!  So original, and your writing is very well done.  I could totally see the nice boy Jim, as well as the flirty, sleezy Jim.  I'm excited to see where this goes, and I hope you continue quickly!  Nice work!



Author's Response: Thanks!!  I'm excited to see where it goes too, although I guess as the writer I'm biased...

Reviewer: elly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 04:56 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

I really like this concept, Stablergirl. I like that you painted "Jim Halpert" as kind of a prick and he's a real guy. I know I'm not making much sense but I can't wait to read what's coming next!

Author's Response: I know what you mean, i get annoyed sometimes with the whole "Jim is perfect" routine, which is probably why I even started writing this in the first place.  ;-)

Reviewer: nandance Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 04:33 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

Woah! I started reading this and thought it wouldn't be my style, but by the end I was TOTALLY sucked in. This is awesome! I think it's just weird enough of a premise to be totally right haah and I love this! Can't wait for the update

Author's Response: lol oh good I can definitely deal with just weird enough! I'm happy it turned out to be your style after all ;-) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 04:28 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

Stablergirl, this is awesome! I love it! It's like picturing Jim Halpert as John Krasinski as Russell Crowe (ok, bad reference, I was just trying to think of someone who has the reputation of being a jerk lol) who is actually named Jim Halpert.
Can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response:

I actually kind of liked the Russell Crowe reference ;-)  Thanks for liking this story! Hopefully it won't disappoint.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 04:18 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

How can I hate it, stablergirl, especially whenit comes with a side of How It Falls?  You've certainly gotten my attention (as you always manage to do).  It really is bizarre, though, picturing our favorite characters out of character.  Interested to see where this is headed.

Author's Response:

I know, so strange.  i actually can't believe I followed through with this idea and posted it, maybe my reputation is ruined... lol ;-)  Anyway thanks for reading and reviewing!!! I have to get on responding to my How it Falls reviews too, I'm such a slacker lately.

Reviewer: Catie9 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2008 04:10 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.

I am loving this! You get four gold stars for a very unique conception here. I hope we get to see Jim's side of things...maybe learn that his prickliness towards Pam has everything to do with the fact that he likes a lady in an oversized sweater and glasses! Well done, SG, and you can better believe I'll be first in line for chapter 2!

Author's Response: lol thank you! unique is definitely one word for it.

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