Date: April 25, 2008 05:04 am Title: Chapter 7
This chapter has been my favorite so far. I love Christmas fics and you wrote this one wonderfully! I'm looking forward to the rest and I hope you update soon! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm really glad that you enjoyed this chapter. I hope to have the next one up by Monday or Tuesday.
Date: April 09, 2008 07:14 am Title: Chapter 6
That chapter was excellent! Great job! Each sentence you have written is brilliant and there is never a dull moment in your writing. Fantastic job; I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
I'm glad that you are liking the story and that you enjoyed this chapter. I had a hard time trying to get some of the sadness and fear in there.
Hopefully chapter 8 will be up soon.
Date: April 02, 2008 04:33 am Title: Chapter 5
very good chapter! i loved it!
just one thing: Jim Carrey and Steve Carell were recently in Horton Hears a Who and you said they were going to see The Game Plan. I just wanted to point that out. OTherwise, it was AWESOME and I'm looking forward to the next chcapter?
Thanks. I am going to change that now. I originally had it has Horton, but then remembered that this chapter takes place in October.
I'm glad you are liking this.
Date: March 31, 2008 03:26 pm Title: Prologue
The fact that JJ could pick up on the prank was priceless. I guess he comes by it naturally. Loved the work interaction. I just really love this whole story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you are enjoying it. The next chapter should be up in a couple days,
Date: March 30, 2008 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
“Hello tiny ones. My name is Dwight K. Schrute and I work with your uncle. Question: Do both of you have slacker tendencies like Jim?”'
Best line ever, right there. I am REALLY enjoying this. I'm looking forward to more. You are doing a spectacular job!
Author's Response: I really can't take credit for that line. That was elly. She gave me that line and that inspired the rest of the scene which is all original. I'm glad you are liking this. The next chapter should be up in a few days.
Date: March 30, 2008 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
So maybe I made myself tough out my lack of concentration and continue reading. I really like this. Tears are falling from my eyes, just to let you know.
Oh. Thank you so much for your review. It really made me smile, even though you aren't. I'm glad you are toughing through your lack of concentration to read this. Thanks
Date: March 30, 2008 05:18 pm Title: Prologue
I just started reading this story and I love it already! I really want to move on to the next chapter but I'm lacking in concentration right now. Haha! But this is great and I can't wait until I begin to read the rest!
Date: March 22, 2008 08:15 am Title: Prologue
Very creative idea! I loved it :D Hope you'll update soon!!
Author's Response: I am glad that you like it. I am celebrating easter weekend with My family so I don't think I will be updating until monday or tuesday, but I should have 2 new chapters posted.