10 [Report This]Date: March 06, 2010 11:25 pm Title: when I get home
Really great beginning! Even though I'm sure the story will break my heart, I can't stop myself from reading. :) I really want to see Jim's reasonings for his cheating. Hope for an update soon!
10 [Report This]Date: January 02, 2009 12:42 am Title: when I get close to something beautiful
Oh, dear. I might just stop reading now.
But even I know I'm too curious to do that. Here goes...
*grits teeth and plunges into next chapter*
Oh, this was very well written, by the way. :D
Date: March 26, 2008 01:11 pm Title: when I get home
Please make it soon! The suspense is killing me! :)
6 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2008 08:52 pm Title: when I get close to something beautiful
I love fluff--and right at the beginning, too! You did a great job of planting that teaser...that one thing Jim's dissatisfied with. I am very interested to read more. --Strider
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Strider!
9 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2008 08:26 pm Title: when I get close to something beautiful
*GASP Jim? cheats on....Pam??? Surely you meant Jim MARRIES Pam.
Interesting idea. I wil be interested to see how both of them handle it AND FIND THEIR WAY BACK TO EACH OTHER. DAMMIT!!! ;) JK. Kind of.
Author's Response: Teehee. I hope I can make it interesting for you and I think they'll be some light at the end of the tunnel. You'll just have to read to find out. ;) Thanks so much for reading, bros. (and awesome username btw, hehe)
10 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2008 07:03 pm Title: when I get close to something beautiful
I'm a hardcore JAMmer but I really like this idea and if told right, I think this story has the potential to be great. I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see where you take this story!
Author's Response: I hope I can do it justice. Thanks so much for reading, Elly.
Date: March 25, 2008 06:58 pm Title: when I get close to something beautiful
Well, the hardcore Jammers will surely be after you with flaming pitchforks, I for one am very intrigued to see where this is going. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Hehe, I am prepared! ..sort of. Thanks so much for taking the time to review, Wendy!
10 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2008 06:37 pm Title: when I get close to something beautiful
Ok, you drew me in with the fluff, now bring on the angst! I'm ready. I think.
Author's Response: Hehe, I hope so! Thanks so much for reading.