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Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2021 01:42 pm Title: Five Dates Jim and Pam Have Yet to Go On

All the heart eyes 😍😍😍

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2007 11:07 am Title: Five Things Pam Never Said to Jim

This chapter is my favorite. I love her "I just wanted to see you." and her calling him in the middle of the night to say she loves snow and that she misses him. And the last one is so, so sad. All of those made me cry. And the first one with the lifesaver thing was so cute.

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2007 11:05 am Title: Five Dates Jim and Pam Have Yet to Go On

I thought I'd read this before, but I hadn't! I love this so much, especially the last one, where he couldn't wait any longer to propose to her, so he did before they even got into the car.

Reviewer: ficklevillain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2007 03:58 pm Title: Five Dates Jim and Pam Have Yet to Go On

oh. i love this five things. they're all so pretty when i picture them in my head. (and that last one...i don't think i remembered to breathe when i read it. i just smiled.)

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 18, 2006 10:18 pm Title: Five Dates Jim and Pam Have Yet to Go On

Ok, I literally made some wierd like "ugh" sound when he proposed on the sidewalk.

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2006 10:06 pm Title: Five Times Jim Secretly Kissed Pam At Work

Okay, touching smiles instead of kissing? Adorable and hot at the same time, just like Jim and Pam. I loved these, all five things.

Reviewer: Chloe Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2006 09:29 pm Title: Five Livejournal Entries Jim Never Wrote About Pam (Because Jim Is Too Cool for Livejournal)

almost made me cry.  you really captured him - job well done.

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 04:17 pm Title: Five Times Jim Secretly Kissed Pam At Work

These all made me tingle a little bit. I wish they would just kiss each other at random times like this :)

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 04:14 pm Title: Five Livejournal Entries Jim Never Wrote About Pam (Because Jim Is Too Cool for Livejournal)

I feel like this would definitely be Jim's voice if he wrote livejournal entries. Loved how you catalogued the progression of their relationship.

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 12:41 pm Title: Five Times Jim Secretly Kissed Pam At Work

Oh.....I LOVE this!  How great - love the frosting detail, too!

Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 10:39 am Title: Five Dates Jim and Pam Have Yet to Go On

He asks her which flavor just to watch her cheeks when she laughs.

“Cherry.”

 

I loved that.  These are all spot on perfect.  Awesome.

Reviewer: justy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 02:29 am Title: Five Things Pam Never Said to Jim

That last one. I think my heart actually broke a little. 

 

And I loved #4

"I love snow."

"I know."

"I miss you."  

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 08:45 pm Title: Five Livejournal Entries Jim Never Wrote About Pam (Because Jim Is Too Cool for Livejournal)

I had other words there, lined up on my tongue, but they didn’t come out.

That line is just wonderful.   I really, really like this "five things"!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 07:09 pm Title: Five Dates Jim and Pam Have Yet to Go On

I love list, so I'm loving this "5 things" theme everyone seems to have going. The title of chapter 3 had me laughing out loud, and I was struck by #5 of chapter 2, until I remembered the title was "5 things Pam never says to Jim". Then all was ok again.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 06:32 pm Title: Five Dates Jim and Pam Have Yet to Go On

#5 was the absolute best.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 06:30 pm Title: Five Livejournal Entries Jim Never Wrote About Pam (Because Jim Is Too Cool for Livejournal)

Nice. 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 06:29 pm Title: Five Things Pam Never Said to Jim

Killed me with that last one there.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 06:27 pm Title: Five Times Jim Secretly Kissed Pam At Work

Like that one.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 04:22 pm Title: Five Times Jim Secretly Kissed Pam At Work

These are all great, as I have noted elsewhere. :)

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 04:10 pm Title: Five Dates Jim and Pam Have Yet to Go On

I so enjoyed these. You managed to say so much about them in such a simple, understated way. Really moving. It's hard to say which is my favorite, because they're all so damn right.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 03:53 pm Title: Five Times Jim Secretly Kissed Pam At Work

Glad you posted it here too!  I just love your series of "Five Things."

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 03:32 pm Title: Five Times Jim Secretly Kissed Pam At Work

I'm so happy you uploaded them here.  As I commented on LJ, they are all lovely stories.  The date on Jim's birthday has got to be my favourite.

Reviewer: MrsHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 03:12 pm Title: Five Dates Jim and Pam Have Yet to Go On

incredable story!! so sweet and very moving. very descriptive and visual. i love all of the chapters. you are wonderful!!!! =)

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