7 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2009 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
"She caught his mouth the way she always did, swift and small, her tongue always tasting of sweet nectar, pulling him in so the rest of the world fell into oblivion and his last hope on earth was that this woman be there until he was unable to love with every part of his soul, until forever.
Date: May 27, 2008 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
loved it...hard to understand when you went from past to present and then back, but loved the how halpert clan being introduced...can't wait for more (hopefully it won't be another 2 months)
Date: March 31, 2008 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
This brought tears to my eyes. So sweet and poignant.
Date: March 31, 2008 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I definitely crying now. This is such a beautiful piece! Bittersweet and reminiscent. Great job!
Date: March 31, 2008 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1
aww...so good...kinda confused when the flashback started...can't wait for more!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 31, 2008 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh so heartbreakingly beautiful. So in love all these years later. Thanks for making me cry on a Monday afternoon. :) I hope you will continue on.
Date: March 31, 2008 08:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Terrific job. The last paragraph left me choked up. Yes, I can see them like that.
10 [Report This]Date: March 31, 2008 08:02 am Title: Chapter 1
This was beautiful, and absolutely heartbreaking. It's really rare to find a story that is able to convey a lifetime of love so well, and you've done a wonderful job here.
8 [Report This]Date: March 31, 2008 07:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm teary-eyed. So sad, but so lovely.