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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2008 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is something I could see. I've had those same doubts about Phyllis myself, and it's neat that you wrote a story about it.  I loved these lines:

You know, I'm pretty good at petty and stupid

Karen held up that god awful green bra and panties outfit and Phyllis smiled and said “Jim's gonna love that” - and then made some giggle that made my flesh crawl

I enjoyed it, moxie!  And look, we're past April 10th now! :) 


Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2008 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, the green bra and panties!  I had forgotten about them, too.  Nice.  I can totally see what Pam means about the little things with Phyllis.  Excellent pick up on them.

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2008 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1

ok first of all i really liked this.  I was really trying to guess what it was and this isn't the first thing that came to mind, so good job with that. 

also, i was completely finished and then noticed the name of the fic and it took me a second to get it. nice.  

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2008 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Solid story Mox!  you don't miss a detail on this great show. I get the feeling Jim like Phyillis as well like a big sister or something.  I think Phyillis actually is happy for JAM but does say some silly things at times that annoy Pam more than Jim.

Great Job.


PS I eagerly await more appeasing Miss Beasly... But no pressure LOL.


Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2008 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Gee, Mox, you must be a young-un if you look forward to birthday's as much as we're looking forward to April 10th!  I haven't looked forward to my birthday in a looooong time.  But I digress.  I would like to jump on the "Phyllis isn't as nice as she seems" bandwagon.  Her giving KF (still can't say her name without cringing which is sad since it's my name too. Except the Fillipelli part, of course)  the thumbs up on that icky outfit was bad but her smart a$$ comment in the breakroom was downright mean. I hope Pam finds something very appropriate for a "nice to your face as she's reaching around to stab you in the back with one hand while planning a wedding using all of your ideas with the other" kind of person.   You know, now that I really think about it, Phyllis can be kind of a bitch. 

Reviewer: susanita Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2008 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw.  Happy JAM is the cutest JAM of all the JAMs.   We know we can't trust Phyllis, but I still have a soft spot for her, even with her creepiness.  I guess I always root for the underdog. 

Great story.  It gave me a much needed smile.  :-) <-- see! 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2008 06:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Hee.  I guess you couldn't post this with the original title, huh?   I have to say, I can identify with Pam.  I used to think Phyllis was pulling for those crazy kids, but that scene in the VS made my skin crawl, too.  Then the comment about Pam sending new clients to 'whoever she was sleeping with that week' made me want to smack her.  Because, yeah, Pam is the office mattress, dating two guys in 10 years.

And I do love the idea that Phyllis was steering Karen toward something ugly (which implies that Jim thought it (they?) was ugly too.  So ugly he made her sleep on the coach, I hope. 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2008 06:43 am Title: Chapter 1

2 christmases together? random thing to love, but I do!

my brain isn't awake nough to quote everything i love, but i just love the sublte relationship things youve put in, just their little teasing, and hads and such.

and, a private flashing at home makes me do a kevin giggle.

"god awful green ra"
its a ra now? is that what all the kids are calling bra's nowdays (yes i know I am younger than you!) :)

you really don't like that outfit that Karen chose do you?

“It would have been a little hard to figure out how to start that conversation.”
o it wouldn't. "so Phyllis, you know that ugly green puke thing that Karen bought. You just said Jim would love it so he would break up with her and go have sex with me, right?"
Whats difficult about that? :)

Jim has Pam, Jim has Pam, Jim has Pam!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2008 06:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Moxie, one more gem for your treasure chest of fic.  Love it.  That little VS scene always rubbed me the wrong way, since I always thought Phyllis rooted for Pam and Jim.  Plus, of course, there's the comment in the lunch room about randomly assigning clients.  Jealous much, Phyllis?

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2008 03:43 am Title: Chapter 1

So well written, Mox.  Just love the two of them and how comfortable they are together and how well they communicate with each other.  So typical that the incident Pam is holding on to, isn't even a blip on Jim's radar.  And yet he doesn't dismiss her concerns out of hand.  So great.   Thanks for sharing this!

Reviewer: elly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2008 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was adorable, Moxie. You write JAM fluff like no one else. All of your stories deserve a blue ribbon. Or better yet, A John K ribbon!

Reviewer: BlueBustyGal Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2008 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love it! I have a long running list of reasons that Phyllis is a bitch. I have never seen her as the benevolent Mother Goose Jam shipper. If she didn't look maternal and unassuming, we wouldn't assume she was. Honestly. So, this is right up my alley. 

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2008 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I'm liking this! Great jump to the future and I really like that Pam is holding on to something like that. Mostly cause I kinda do the same thing with some people. *blushes*

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2008 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

very cute :)  And for the record, I still haven't forgiven Phyllis for that, either. 

This was the perfect little Pam/Jim glimpse I needed.  This next week and three days can't go by fast enough, but this helps. 

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