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Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2019 08:32 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Damn that ending yo. I really enjoyed this vision of an alternate world.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2008 08:04 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooh that was really good. I hate those women :(

Reviewer: jollyholly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 10:22 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

i read this story once before somewhere else and loved it but thought it was lost..so happy to see it here! You can really feel how much Jim loves Pam. And the ending *sigh* so sweet!

Author's Response:

I woefully late in my review responds but thank you jollyholly.  I'm happy you found it again.  Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: schrutebucks Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 10:12 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

I love this! I know this is old, but any chance of an epilogue? ;)

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it.  Ummm.  I kinda feel like I have written an epilogue (or two or three) with all the happily ever after and married Jim & Pam stories in my little collection.  But I'm always open to prompts - so if you'd like - email me with what you have in mind and I'll see what I can do. :)  Thanks again!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it.  Ummm.  I kinda feel like I have written an epilogue (or two or three) with all the happily ever after and married Jim & Pam stories in my little collection.  But I'm always open to prompts - so if you'd like - email me with what you have in mind and I'll see what I can do. :)  Thanks again!

Reviewer: TheWaiter Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 09:15 am Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Gold. Pure Gold. Just like the rest of your work. Keep it up!



Author's Response: Well that is incredibly sweet of you to say.  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Dwim Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2007 07:52 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

I'm a little late getting to this, but I'm trying to catch up with the the best of the best, and I think this definitely fits!



Author's Response:

Aww!  Honestly I ADORE when my older fics are reviewed so please - better late than never.

You are too sweet!  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Calli Wall Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 02:20 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

eee! I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks Calli!!

Reviewer: sicokitty Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 07:21 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

ahh this reminds me of many conversations i had with my husbandwhen i was feeling particularly frumpy.  jim is precious.

Author's Response: He's beyond precious.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 06:20 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Great story! I especially loved this line - "It won’t change the fact that she’s the one who gets to go home with him at the end of the night.at story! "  Yes you do Pam, you lucky girl! 

Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it.  And I'm sooooo jealous myself.  If I can't be with him though - Pam certainly will. :)

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 04:11 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

EEEEEEE!! So so so cute & lovely. I think you capture them both perfectly here and I really feel like this would be their dynamic--particularly at the beginning of their relationship before Pam builds up some self esteem.

Author's Response: So so so glad you thought so!  Thanks yippee!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 12:59 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

WOW. I love this so much -- really.  And I think it works beautifully!!

Author's Response: Thank you girl7!!!   I'm so glad you liked it.  I'm trying to make it through your last chapters.  So much to read!!!  You must have had quite a weekend.  LOL!

Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 10:19 am Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Oh yeah!  InsecurePam was great, as was ReassuringJim.  Loved it!

Author's Response: ReassuringJim is quite the man is he not???  Thanks Jonah5!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 09:26 am Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Awww... I want to squeeeze this story, and I want to squeeeze Jim!

Sweet! 



Author's Response: Heeeeee!  Can I please squeeze him when you're done?? 

Reviewer: Semby Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 09:14 am Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

That was so, so sweet. And the ending made me squeal!

Author's Response:

I knew that's how it would end when I started.  It was the middle that I wasn't quite sure of.  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

 

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 06:34 am Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

I LOVED THIS.  Really well done.

Author's Response: I'M SO GLAD.  Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 06:12 am Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Oh, wow. Wow. This was so real, so lived-in, that I forgot for a moment that I'm at work. You capture that insecurity and self-doubt that informs Pam so perfectly, and you also gave us that desperately protective Jim that she takes for granted. This was one of your best.

Author's Response:

You're making me blush nqillisi.  I'm so very glad you liked it.  I really almost just kept this one to myself so to hear you say you think it was that good makes me giddy.  Thanks so much.

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 06:11 am Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Great story! You really do have these two down so well. Your stories have gotten me through this long story. Can we have a Chapter 2 where Jim and Pam play a prank on the Stamford bitches? Or should I just imagine the pig's blood pouring down on them?

Author's Response: It is my distinct pleasure TV_Buffy.  I'm so thankful for the distraction of fanfic myself.  Hmmm.  Maybe someday I'll have Pam develop telekenetic powers of her own.  I mean - Jim can already move coat racks. ;)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 06:03 am Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Nice. He's such a sweetie.

Author's Response: That he is. :)

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 05:52 am Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Lovely job at capturing Pam's insecurities and the completely vapid bitchiness of some people! And Jim saves the day - sensitive, romantic Jim... I love your fluff!

Author's Response: I swear to God.  I know he's a fictional character (honestly - I really do)  but damnit if I don't want him cloned and walking around the halls of my own office.  I'll even get a perm if he's got a thing for girls with curls.  LOL!

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 04:51 am Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

That was so great.  Poor Pam.  Amazing Jim.  Stupid Stamford bitches.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I agree.  Don't you want her to go back and just slap them??? 

I'd like it to preferrably be with her left hand....as her ing finger sports a big honking diamond. :)



Author's Response:

That'd be ring finger...cause I have no idea which finger would be her "ing" one. 

 

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 03:49 am Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Swoon. Lovely, beautiful...a little gem. And I'm so flattered to be mentioned in your intro - much tho I love the idea of 'bold Pam', I also think there's a touching insecurity there (I could give a dozen examples if this was the place for it)...and Jim loves her for all of her. I could so see your scenario here. 'Are you carrying my yearbook picture?'  Love, love, love him to bits. Thanks for this perfect glimpse of Jim-ness.



Author's Response:

I was inspired by your little bits of insecure Pam in your last fic and viola.  Here's the result.

Love, love, love him to bits.

God help me.  I'm right there with you. :)

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous 7 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 02:37 am Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

This was nice. The emotions were real - especially Pam's insecurity.

You mentioned the myspace pics. Rashida looked well put together. Wonder how that will play out.

In the author's note you said this grew out of your exprience with a dress you wore to a wedding. What happened?



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you thought so.  That was my feeling too.  Pam's look is so plain and I had an inkling anyone Jim might have occasion to come in contact with IF he transferred might be a tad more sophisticated.

As far as what happened - nothing nearly this dramatic.  Just me wearing a fancier dress than most of the guests at the wedding and feeling slightly out of place.  That fact inspired a story about Pam overhearing catty comments about her dress in the Ladies' Room but all I got were compliments. :)  Happy to report all the drama all occurs on these pages.

Reviewer: proposals Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 10:54 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Oh, and what's this about a myspace debacle? Do tell! I'm so out of the loop.

Author's Response: Oh.  LOL!  Jenna posted some S3 pics.  People are in a real tizzy over speculation about it.  I'm crossing my fingers and trusting the incredible writers.  Oh - and apparently writing fluffy Jam fanfic like it's my freaking job.  :) 

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 10:53 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

I'm pretty sure all of the squealing and giddy laughing I just did woke everyone in my house. You always have pitch-perfect characterization, but I just need to tell you that you have them down so well that it always amazes me.

I loved the "I’d hate to find out you were a catty, bitter, miserable bitch after all this time" line. I pictured him saying that, and I swear there is nothing sexier, and I don't know why.

God, this was just perfect. Amazing job!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm always afraid one day I'll come here and someone will say...you have them down so well - don't you have a job or something else to do???  LOL! 

It really helps that I read everything I can get my hands on and the fact that Jenna's really forthcoming with details of how she sees Pam.  Makes it easy. :)

I'm so very glad you liked it.

Reviewer: samsmom Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 10:20 pm Title: btw - she totally says yes. :)

Take that, snobby witches!!!

Author's Response:

I know!!!  Best.  Payback.  EVER. ;)

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