Date: September 20, 2008 04:43 pm Title: Eleven
Awwwww.....I've missed this story! It's been ages since you last updated. I'm surprised Michael didn't plan any "activities" like beach games. Jim and Pam are too cute!! I hope it lasts and Karen doesn't ruin it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: If you don't like spoilers, then don't read what I'm about to put in starsrn***** I was totally planning on putting a beach games bit in this story. And I read your review and figured that you must read my mind. NICE!*****rnrnAnyway, I'm glad you are happy this story is back! I'm so sorry for my long break... Hopefully I won't do that again!
Date: September 20, 2008 02:30 pm Title: Eleven
This chapter was beyond cute. The whole thing with building a sandcastle was great (and in no way dorky. i'm 20 and still build them).
THe two little girls and the talk about kids in the future was charming.
Loving the sweetness of the story and can't wait for the sailboat adventure.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for yet again, such a sweet review! I'm so happy you give me such praise.. It means a lot!rnAnd I still build sandcastles, too. I go full out and buy stuff at home depot that can substitute for sandcastle tools, and not to toot my own horn (did I just write that? LAME), but they turn out pretty neat!
Date: September 11, 2008 12:42 pm Title: Nine
It's grrrrreat (Tony, the Tiger)! I love Jim.
Author's Response: Haha, right now I'm cracking up because i thought you said Toby the Tiger. I thought "How brilliant!" but then I realized you really WERE talking about the actual Tony. But I'm so happy you like it! And how your pen name is Orfice.
Date: September 11, 2008 08:34 am Title: Nine
It took me awhile to get reacquainted with this one. I am enjoying it very much and am glad you're back!
Author's Response: I'm very happy you're reacquainted and that you're happy I'm back! I'm glad to be writing again. I've had way too many hiatuses for my liking!
Date: September 11, 2008 07:52 am Title: Nine
first off YAY!! I have been waiting to find out what happens to everyone on the cruise.
I just read both updated chapters and have to say that they are both really good. I love what you did with introducing another couple. The stunt Michael pulled was brilliant and Karen being an evil and now slightly slutty bitch makes this story wonderful.
I can't wait to see what you do with the storm and Pam's seasickness.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you commented on those three things; especially the Michael stunt! I was very happy to have written those but no one has mentioned whether they liked it or not, so I began to be a little worried. And I have the new chapter written with Pam's seasickness and I hope you like what I do with it! I'm so happy you enjoy this story and that you're such a fantastic reviewer!
Date: September 08, 2008 08:22 am Title: Eight
I was happy to see this story again. They are very cute and Michael is very annoying!
Author's Response: Ah, I'm so glad Michael really turned out annoying! That's just what I was aiming for! I'm glad you like it.. Thanks for the review!
Date: September 07, 2008 07:23 pm Title: Three
How Dwight to have a German army suitcase!
"He reached over, turned off the lamp, and kissed her head one more time before closing his eye as well."
I think you meant to say "eyes", unless of course Jim is a Cyclops (just kidding!)
Author's Response: WHOOPS! My bad! I'll be sure to change that right away, because we wouldn't want our precious Jim Halpert to be mistaken as a cyclops now, would we?
Date: September 07, 2008 07:08 pm Title: Two
I like Pam's reactions to Karen:
"She then tightened her grip on Jim’s hand as if it could somehow signal Karen that he didn’t belong to her anymore and that she should stop talking to him."
Author's Response: Aw, well thank you! I'm so happy you're enjoying it! Thanks again for the reviews!
Date: September 07, 2008 06:48 pm Title: One
I love Jim's idea of playing games with the tabloids! The thought of Jim/Pam and Karen on the same boat gives me cold chills, and not the good kind.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like my ideas! And you'll just have to read on and review to tell me how you like the way I play out the Jim/Karen/Pam situation : )
Date: April 12, 2008 10:10 am Title: One
I love this because I love cruises and I love Jim & Pam. Yay! for two of my favorite things in a story!
Author's Response: I must be psychic or something, then! Don't you think? (: I'm so happy you like this story! Keep the reviews comin'!
Date: April 11, 2008 07:02 pm Title: Seven
I love this fic! Wow, Karen and Ryan, that's a crazy pairing! LOL. Keep writing!
Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear that! And yeah; it's awkward but that's why i did it (:
Keep those reviews comin'!