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Reviewer: GoIrish Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2008 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cute! How funny is this - I'm actually getting married on this New Year's Eve!

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2008 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

I liked the story but it seemed really rushed.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2008 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Congrats on your first fic, and thanks for taking the challenge! 

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2008 06:11 am Title: Chapter 1

it was a good idea...i would have liked it more if there were more details and it was stretched out over multiple chapters cause it kinda felt like they did one thing and then another thing and then another without any meat about anything they did

Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2008 04:38 am Title: Chapter 1

This was very cute! Great job on portraying these characters!

Watch out for comma errors. You had a couple. For instance, in many sentences you should have put a semi-colon or a period but you just put in another comma and turned it into a run-on. Otherwise, I loved this story and I'm looking forward to reading more of your things! 

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2008 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

I didn't want it to end. It was just really that good.

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