1 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2024 12:09 pm Title: Part One
This story is so hot, but the plot and your storytelling are really what makes it exceptional. Thanks for sharing!
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2009 03:34 pm Title: Part One
A-W-E! *clap clap* S-O-M-E! Awesome, awesome is what you are, you're a smutfic superstar!
ok, now that i have that out of my system.....
this was awesome. i love a well-written smut fic. and i love that pam got a leg cramp. adds some "realness" to the fic. nobody has perfect sex all the time.
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2009 09:05 pm Title: Part One
You're so awesome lol
9 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2008 05:58 pm Title: Part One
HOT stuff. Very much liked, please write more =)
Date: September 30, 2008 05:29 am Title: Part One
Wow. Just, wow.
So... about that Part Two...
Date: April 21, 2008 02:29 pm Title: Part One
Well-written. [Check]
Funny. [Check]
Sexy. [Check]
8 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2008 10:19 pm Title: Part One
Wow. That's hot. Niiiice.
Date: April 19, 2008 05:23 am Title: Part One
So hot! I love bold Pam behind the camera ordering him to take his shirt off and Jim's cure for leg cramps? YES.
8 [Report This]Date: April 17, 2008 09:50 pm Title: Part One
oo-la-la! this is terribly hot...
10 [Report This]Date: April 17, 2008 09:03 am Title: Part One
Gah, this is just fantastic, as usual. Smut and humor, combined with a healthy dose of reality (who hasn't had the leg cramps?) make it perfect.
10 [Report This]Date: April 17, 2008 05:31 am Title: Part One
I love this. For a few reasons. First, because it's hot. Very hot. As hot as a really hot thing. Second, because you really keep it true to their relationship. It's not just smut, but a nice little look into their intimacy together and you really convey their feelings for one another so well, but you still keep it fun and sexy at the same time. Well done, my friend.
10 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2008 09:39 pm Title: Part One
Very nice!
Date: April 16, 2008 08:24 pm Title: Part One
Only a good writer like you can incorporate Jan and Michael's creepy bedroom antics and make it completely Jim and Pam. Good job! That was totally awesome :)
Date: April 16, 2008 08:00 pm Title: Part One
beruco, I've gone back and read all your stories and they're great, and this one is no different. They are perfect to turn to when in need of some great smut. If hot and funny are what you strive for, you're definitely succeeding. I look forward to more.
Date: April 16, 2008 05:35 pm Title: Part One
Thanks beruco, that was so sexy and fun! Loved it. Personally, I think they should watch the video together. They could giggle and do silly critiques about what terrible porn it is. "Leg cramps? Seriously? Who gets leg cramps during fantastic sex like that?" I can hear them now, those crazy kids.
Awesome job, as usual!
10 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2008 12:20 pm Title: Part One
A hot, sweaty treat from beruco! I saw this pop up before I had to leave for a lunch meeting and then I was expected to concentrate while suspecting what I had to look forward to upon my return. So unfair. Needless to say, loved this.
Author's Response:
Oh, reading smut at work. NEVER A GOOD IDEA. But thank you anyway for your enthusiasm. <3
10 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2008 12:04 pm Title: Part One
Wow, that was hot. Loved it. Dirty, but it still felt like them. Fantastic job!
Author's Response: I love to hear that it was in-character. It's really what I try for above everything else. So, thanks. :D
Date: April 16, 2008 10:22 am Title: Part One
Hmm. Am I offended or honored??? Both. I want you to be afraid of how much you love me.
Author's Response: And I am, love.
Date: April 16, 2008 10:04 am Title: Part One
Good god that was fabulous. Well done! Your stories are absolutely fantastic and so well written. Keep up the excellent, excellent work.
Author's Response: Good God you're an ego-stroker! <3
Date: April 16, 2008 09:36 am Title: Part One
Wow, hot stuff. And so funny as well! Love the idea of Jim being a bit of a slob.
Author's Response: Hot and funny is what I aim for--THX!
Date: April 16, 2008 09:32 am Title: Part One
LOOOOOVE the ending. Glad you were able to, um, extend Jim's pleasure. Ha. God, I'm pervy. ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it (at work, no less)! I was having a really hard time. (TWSS)
Date: April 16, 2008 09:26 am Title: Part One
Great googly moogly, you incorporated Jan & Michael's creepy bedroom tripod and made it into lovely Jam!Smut.
I guess Pam won't need to buy any more celebrity sex tapes online now, huh?
Author's Response: How did I know the first review would be from you? ;)