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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2022 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooooh, I really love the way you've gotten into Pam’s head here as she confronts the sides of Jim she doesn’t know and how much she'd like to.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2008 08:33 am Title: Chapter 1

I wish they'd smooched lol

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2006 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

"Phyllis must've taken the picture, she thought, remembering from the beginning of that night that she had beed snapping pictures left and right."

 

Perfect detail, cause Phyllis is so on to Jim and Pam, and rooting for then. I can totally see her giving a picture to Jim, knowing it would mean something to him.

 

Great fic! Very in character. 

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

"Friends do that kind of thing, right?"

LOL, Pam totally would tell herself that--anything to avoid the truth, right?

This was a great little snippet, thanks!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very in character - great job!

Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved this!

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

this felt so true to the show and their dynamic that i could practically see this play out in my head. love the details too--like the photo of them together and the fact that the bed was "an inanimate object version of jim."

such a wonderful moment.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is perfect.  I can absolutely see every moment.  I love stories about Pam daydreaming about what if's with Jim.  :)

Reviewer: mixedberries Anonymous 7 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey! I found you too! I really liked this. It was a nice snapshot of Pam exploring his room. I really liked seeing his room in the episode too. It told you a lot of things you didn't know about the character. Nice job!

Reviewer: mixedberries Anonymous 7 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey! I found you too! I really liked this. It was a nice snapshot of Pam exploring his room. I really liked seeing his room in the episode too. It told you a lot of things you didn't know about the character. Nice job!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for the Pam insight regarding Jim's room.  That is one of my favorite scenes from the show.  Wonderful work!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Always wanted to know what she was doing in his room before he showed up. Great job.

Reviewer: cheapcolouredlights Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1

What a great moment. Yeah, we never saw what else they talked about in his room... hmm..

Anyway it was very true to character and real to what the stage of their relationship was at that point, just like something we would actually see.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 10:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved Pam checking out all Jim's stuff - really conveyed how intimate that would feel to her, given their dynamic. Always thought this was one of their most telling scenes (in the show,) so it was great to see someone 'go there' in a fic.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, dumb Pam. You just want to shake her until she gets it- this is IT, Pam. Wonderful moments like this is IT for you!

(Wonderful, wonderful "beyond the cameras" piece!)

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 08:57 am Title: Chapter 1

This is just like all those moments when you're watching the show screaming in your head "Just kiss her!" or "Just tell her!". Nice.

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