Reviews For A Lovers' Quarrel
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Reviewer: Alyx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw, I loved it. Poor Pam. :[

I loved everything about it. My favorite part was:

'He didn't go around and open the passenger door for her, like he always did. For some reason, that hurt the most.'

That was so sad because I could imagine Jim always opening the car door open for Pam.

Superb job!

Reviewer: civillove Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2008 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

ok i just came acrosss this so i had to review it was soooooooo cute :D and your writing is beautiful

Reviewer: false_palindrome Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 05:13 am Title: Chapter 1

i'm so glad you reviewed my story, because now i've found you, and I love you.

Reviewer: Dooflegna Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 06, 2006 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

A very lovely story.  It accomplishes several thing--it's honest, it's well written, and it feels like Jim and Pam.  This is dialogue that I could hear from these two.  My only real criticism of the story is that it doesn't do anything extravegantly daringl, but that shouldn't be considered a huge problem.  It's a short, well-done character piece, and in that vein, I think you are to be highly commended.  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2006 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

"Makes things interesting." - fights suck, but yeah, they do make life interesting. Jim and Pam wouldn't *not* fight, and this was well presented.

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2006 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

so beautiful, real & painful. i think you did such a wonderful job of capturing what their voices & dynamic would be like in this type of situation.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2006 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Excellent work.  You captured this perfectly.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

The fight seems very real--how often do fights like that have important causes?--and I love how they make up, of course!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, you nailed the fight. That is exactly how that feels. And the resolution was perfect. Very nice!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very realistic, reminded me of some of the fights my husband and I have had - especially saying mean things that you know aren't really meant but are said in the heat of the fight. It's a shame that Pam misread his support but I'm glad for the happy ending!

Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was so what a Jim/Pam fight would like.  Sweet ending too!

Reviewer: mixedberries Anonymous 7 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, that letter made me so sad. So sad. I felt so bad for her in that moment, but I love that Jim was so supportive of her. A sweet piece. 

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was fantastic.  You made my stomach hurt a bit.  The part about him not opening the car door for her killed - specifically because I just wrote a scene where Jim did open her door (per usual) and it made Pam swoon a bit.  His gentlemanly-ness is one of my favorite things about him - but I digress....

Completely realistic and very well done.  Great job!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1

No make up kissing/sex?  :) Great job

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Very realistic. I mean, most people would rather avoid the subject than face it head on. Or maybe that's just me? Nice job.

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story, it was a realistic slice-of-life if Pam and Jim were to get together.  It's hard to be together and work together - I know, I do it with my spouse and we act exactly the same way!  This was great.  

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved this. Dialogue was especially well done - sounded just like them and it was easy to get a vivid picture of them as well. Really, really good.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2006 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1

You capture that sickening, disconnected feeling of a fight really well, along with all of the little details (like the wrong shoes). Too well, almost- it was upsetting! :) Thank goodness for a great resolution.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, the thing that gets me really angry is when I lose something... always gets a fight going somehow!

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