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Reviewer: Obviously_Blonde Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2023 09:55 am Title: Smokey the Bear

Pam's inner monologue is another great character of its own! ...Is he kidding me with this? Does someone write this shit for him?...Oh hello smug smirk, nice of you to join us...

Reviewer: Obviously_Blonde Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2023 09:42 am Title: Bonnie and Clyde

"Why are you being so nice to me?”

“Because you’re letting me." This just gets a confused and questioning look from me. "You forget I don’t hate you, you hate me.” - this part is so perfect

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2021 02:29 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

I know this story is 13 years old now but pleaseeeee finish it!!!! It’s so great!!

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2019 09:03 am Title: The Surface of the Sun

Every time I read this I forget how much I love it and I forget where it ends. If you ever get a 10 year or whatever itch and just want to write more of it, please indulge that whim. Otherwise, I guess just thanks for having written it. It is one of the most amazing AUs on the site.

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2017 05:12 am Title: Pretty Pink Things

Oh how I wish I had been aware of mtt back when you were writing this. I would have been one of your biggest supporters and maybe we would have gotten a happy ending to this amazing story!
And yeah, the smut is great but it's really the AU love story that I've fallen for. I love that jims feelings for Pam had nothing to do with the reputation that preceded him and I love that he is working so hard to try to change her perception of him and earn her respect and love. And I love that Jonathan was in on the whole thing and supported him wholly.
It kills me that I don't get to read the outcome :( That was going to be one hell of a 4th of July party!
It's never too late ya know! We've recently had a couple old abandoned fics resurrected some 7-10 years later ;)

Reviewer: ftmill16 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2010 02:31 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

LOVE the entire concept of this story. I am amazed at the way you were able to put Jim and Pam, plus the others in an entirely different scenerio yet totally be true to their personalities. I love the slow reveal of how much Jim cares for and is in fact in love with Pam and the fact that you can clearly see that she is in just as deep as he is. Love the element of him wanting to cook for her and her buying something sexy to wear for him that shows there is a lot more to this than sex.

I REALLY hope you will be continuing this story despite it being so ong since there was an update!

Reviewer: albie_ Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2009 08:20 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

If you're at all curious if too much time has passed and no one's interested in seeing this continue, not too much time and we actually arestill very interested. I figured I'd let you know, just in case :)

Reviewer: bkwrm Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2009 08:51 am Title: Pretty Pink Things

So I happened to stumbled upon this little gem while browsing the archive and the summary was too tempting for me not to read. And now I wished I hadn't start reading because it is so good and addicting but it's not complete! The tension between Jim and Pam was great and when they finally acted on their attraction for one another...wow...that was unbelievably hot. Really, really hot! I really like the alternate universe you've created for TO characters. Overall, this was a really great story! I can only hope that you'll continue this eventually (and judging by the reviews, I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one ;o)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2009 11:41 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

NO MORE??????????

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2009 11:19 pm Title: Night Vision

Humminah, I love sexy hot shirtless Jim!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2009 10:55 pm Title: W.B.F.F.'s

The fact you love TWW and are a J&D shipper makes me love you even more... LOVE IT!!!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2009 10:39 pm Title: Bad Manners

Extra dirty smutcakes = fecking awesome. You are a goddess!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2009 10:28 pm Title: Hot Little Biddy

How have I missed this story, you're a goddess =)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2009 10:14 pm Title: Smokey the Bear

*dead*

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2009 09:59 pm Title: Bonnie and Clyde

Guh, Okay, so that was freaking HOT. You're killing me here, in the best way possible!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2009 09:44 pm Title: World Domination

Okay this is all kinds of hot. I love confident sexy young Jim - and Pam drunk - awesome!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2009 09:31 pm Title: The Surface of the Sun

LMAO what a great idea, Jim so wants to do heeeeer!

Reviewer: andtheivy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2009 05:41 am Title: The Surface of the Sun

I read this story again last night and I'm begging you to continue. I really want to see what comes of this version of Jim and Pam! I'm loving this story like a fat kid loves cake!

Reviewer: mhp614 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 06:08 pm Title: The Surface of the Sun

You need to finish this! It is so awesome!!!

Reviewer: AnnElizabeth Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 02:40 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

This story is fantastic! I don't usually go for totally AU stories where the characters are so different from what I am used to on the show but this is great. You need to finish this (or at least update this) now. Please?

Reviewer: andtheivy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2008 03:42 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

Really want to know what happens next!! Keep going.

Reviewer: Sticious Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2008 07:49 am Title: Pretty Pink Things

I just re-read this and all I have to say is, please update! I love this story!

Reviewer: Gorkerina Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 05, 2008 11:00 am Title: The Surface of the Sun

Like people have already said, I would LOVE for this story to continue. I can see it's been a while since you updated, but sincerely hope that you would consider letting us know how John's dinner preparations go ;o) Amazingly hot story!

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2008 08:58 am Title: Pretty Pink Things

Like the best 5 or so reviewers, I would also love if you updated this amazing story!

Reviewer: albie_ Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 05:51 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

I just reread what is one of the most fun and hot stories I've read on the site. Not sure if you're around anymore, but I wanted to leave some love for the story and some hope that there could be an update. There's just too much good stuff left hanging to leave it there :)

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