Date: April 27, 2008 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like how you've gone into Jim's head a little here and justified his actions- because I thought a lot of things were a little bit out of character in the last episode. And this little tidbit was just wonderful...thanks for sharing!
Date: April 26, 2008 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, I just wanted to give him a hug too. This was great -- I'm not happy with the whole Jim-transforming-into-Michael plot arc on the show but you did a really good job capturing his feelings. Good thing Pam's there to give him that hug. =)
Date: April 26, 2008 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1
aww thanks for that...I felt so bad for them in Thursday's episode! This makes it better
Date: April 25, 2008 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw poor Jim. This episode and Survivor Man really made me hurt for him. His ideas aren't bad, just poorly executed, you're right. And he was Michael-ish on both occasions. Which YIKES.
I know they're setting it up for Jim to reach for more or leave Dunder Mifflin but it still hurts to watch. Thanks for giving him a little redemption with this piece.
Date: April 25, 2008 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes! I was waiting for someone to write a post "Night Out" and this was awesome! The last lines are adorable, and I love that you got inside Jim's head, because that night had to have been truly heinous for him.
Awesome job!
Date: April 25, 2008 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
sigh...just awesome :)
Date: April 25, 2008 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
I want to hear about them making it to Philly!...or anything just more..
Date: April 25, 2008 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Perfect. You wrap up all of the seeming OOC aspects of last night's show in a realisitic and human package. I really like the Jim you've created here.
9 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2008 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice one, Binx! This is how I envison Jim's train of thought. I don't see him as turning into Michael. He just happens to have a few flaws....but he means well : )
Date: April 25, 2008 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome! I am always SO impressed at people who can write such good stories by the next day! This was a great one.
--Strider