Date: October 10, 2009 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
"If she ever went to her dad’s office again, she would smile at Michael and play with his trains and laugh when he did funny voices.
And then she would kick him right where it hurts boys the most."
Date: July 16, 2008 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1
I gotta admit, this title caught my eye.
Ya know, I love it all, but this line:
"He was hot. Why would he have a drug problem?"
But I love how you took these characters we saw for only like 20 minutes, and fleshed them out, and really fleshed out families and friends intereactions. Never even thought of this idea, and you did it beautifully.
Date: April 29, 2008 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Steph, I really like a lot. I like the repetition of how they didn't watch it, but then all ended up watching it through one circumstance or another. The background is great; you've rounded these people out so well.
I love the bit about Meredith and Jake stocking the kitchen with food and such, preparing for social services. I really just love what this story chooses to be. You've left me no choice but to favorite it, as well.
Date: April 28, 2008 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm here by way of TWoP (I'm Resplendent over there, too.) And I'll be honest, I think that this is a great idea for a fic and is really well executed as well. I especially liked "each silently congratulating themselves with getting away with something" and the Kelly/Toby pairing--I'd never thought of them together, but I can see it now.
I also think that you integrated characters idiosyncrasies from The Office really well (your depiction of Kevin comes immediately to mind with the fist bumping and the M&Ms.)
Very enjoyable because it is well thought out and well written.
Date: April 28, 2008 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1
God, this is... brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. Abby's part, with the gentle vulnerability of a teenage girl (along with Kevin's sweet nature) were perfect. Jake's part with Meredith almost made me cry - honestly? So sweet. Melissa... hehehehe. But God. Sasha. GOD. Toby, dear heart. I think this is 100% plausible for the future.
Thank you for writing this. It was genius. Awesome. Thank you.
Date: April 27, 2008 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a really great glimpse into the other side of the story and it is beautifully written. You really take the little bit of personality we got from all of the kids and expanded it wonderfully. I especially loved Sasha's bit it is adorable and sad.
Date: April 27, 2008 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, this is brilliant. Brilliant. Sasha's is my favorite, I think, but I also really like Meredith and her son stocking up the house because they know Social Services is on the way. Oh and Kevin. Kevin!
Okay, so basically, I love this story into little tiny pieces.