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Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2008 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I loved this story, Moxie! Very nice way to mix things up a bit.

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1

It was almost more nerve-wracking knowing he was going to ask than it would have been wondering if he ever would.

I really like that line.  I think it perfectly describes the beauty of this particular torture.  Excellent twist to have Pam propose to Jim though!

I was a bit surprised that Jim focused on Ryan's involvement in the reprimand and not Toby's.  Maybe that's my own take on the whole Toby-likes-Pam storyline though...

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2008 03:19 am Title: Chapter 1

I love that Jim is still going to propose! And I really love the backstory with Wallace that you added. Great post-ep!

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2008 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very cute. I wish that there could've been more talk about the "borderless heart" thing, though. But what can I say, I'm a sap. =D

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2008 05:53 am Title: Chapter 1

Remember the look Jim gave the camera when Michael called her an "ugly scientist"?  He felt badly, since he convinced her to wear her glasses to work instead of stopping for contact solution.  Awww.

Honestly, I don't care how they go about it, or who kicks our ass, I just want to see it!  Less than 2 weeks to go. :)

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2008 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Mox I was getting worried that you gave up writing!  Another great job!  I hope you continue this one.

Thanks,

B

Reviewer: Grape Soda Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2008 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yes!!! As much as I'm dying for Jim to do something huge and spectacularly romantic I've been harboring this secret desire for Pam to propose for a while now. It's so unconventional and so FNB and so... them.

Kudos to you for a beautiful fic!

 

GS

xxx 

Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2008 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Too sweet, Moxie!

Reviewer: skeber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2008 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Another great story!! I love your stories!!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2008 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww this was so sweet! I like that you filled in the Christmas party story, and that Pam proposed first. Very cute! =)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2008 09:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw, Moxie, always so great to hear from you.  I don't think I stopped smiling the whole time I read this.  Your stories have that effect on me. 

Reviewer: missjasadin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2008 09:21 am Title: Chapter 1

ohhhhhhh pam proposing!! i love it!! i kind of hope this actually happends :)
can you continue?? i wanna see jim "kick her ass" with his proposal still.

and the office workers when they see jims ring :P

Reviewer: Ruby Caspar Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2008 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw, too cute! I would totally love for Pam to get fed up and propose to Jim, lol!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2008 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1

I knew someone would have a good 'Pam proposes' fic.  And yes, I had to look up the ring.  Nice choice, Mox.

Glad Jim still plans on kicking our her ass. 

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2008 08:59 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm pretty sure I'm completely repeating myself here, but first let me say, the whole contact solution debacle you speak of?  I've had that happen and it totally sucks.  Love that detail.  As for the rest, I love that she got tired of waiting and things fell into place for her in such a way that she took the bull by the horns, so to speak, and just proposed.  This is a great way to start off my Sunday, so thank you :)

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