Date: July 28, 2008 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 11
I had trouble with parts of this story, but I'm glad I hung on till the end. I love future you gave them and you had such great imagery throughout. I really liked that you gave them some fertility trouble. It kept them very real and I really liked the conversation they had on Christmas about wanting children. Just excellent.
I can't wait to see what you are cooking up next!
Date: July 28, 2008 06:22 am Title: Chapter 1
I feel this is what would've happened had Jim got the job in NY and moved there with the pantsuit queen. It's so refreshing to see good, quality fic on here again! Please tell me you're working on something else! ;)
Date: July 26, 2008 07:42 am Title: Chapter 1
At first I wasn't sure how I felt about this fic but you totally sucked me in. I love the darker tone of it and th dramatic nature of it, especially in later chapters. I wish it didn't have to end :( I kind of wish the JAM reunion was a bit more drawn out but I still love this.
Date: July 21, 2008 11:47 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh man. You've had me in tears since the beginning, I loved your story, you're a fantastic writer, you're so damn good, this story is so damn good, I feel like I"ve watched a movie that I'll daydream about for the next week. Seriously. This deserves a medal. You're awesome. This story is awesome. Jim and Pam are awesome.
Date: July 20, 2008 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wow. So, um, my fantasy JAM proposal has always been him waking her up with it in bed... way to hit the nail on the head? Haha, seriously... I love you for that.
This was beautiful.
Author's Response: You know, I was going to go for something way more dramatic, but it just kind of tumbled out while I was writing and I went with it! So I'm really glad you liked that proposal. I think it works for them! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reviewing!