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Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2009 09:28 pm Title: Closing The Deal

so adorable. i love all the love - cute proposal, too!

completely random: why oh why on your author's page does it say you've only written 4 stories??? you've got at least one for every letter!

Reviewer: fashion_show_at_lunch Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 05:08 pm Title: Closing The Deal

bahhhh I wish this really happened! and that we got to see it! I always thought it would be fitting if he just blurted it out when he couldn't hold it in anymore. that was perfect.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2008 10:05 am Title: Closing The Deal

this just makes me giggly and excited and smiley and all sorts of great things just reading it!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2008 08:28 am Title: Closing The Deal

like they were characters in some kind of epic romance

Heh.  Yeah.  Just like that.  Imagine that!

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2008 10:16 pm Title: Closing The Deal

Now THIS is the proposal I want to see!  I love Pam's desire to be near him, touching him all the time, because I really think that's how it is when the cameras aren't around.  you know, for Jim and Pam, fictional characters.  Thanks for the delicious bit of fluff, you.

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2008 03:31 pm Title: Closing The Deal

so cute! :)

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2008 08:15 am Title: Closing The Deal

Aw! That was fantastic. It makes me so giddy. Yay!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2008 05:40 am Title: Closing The Deal

Oh.  Perfect.  I'd be lying if I told you I hadn't been thinking the exact same thing - that there was no way those two didn't run out of there and back to one of their apartments.  You captured what I imagined perfectly so yay you!!!

Reviewer: standinginthedoorway Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2008 04:52 am Title: Closing The Deal

"Then that delicious tumbling into his apartment, still giddy with it...with each other...with possibility...with love and something even better...like."

The "I like you" line was so sweet I'm glad you included it. This fic is really sweet as well. I like JIm just blurting it out and then regretting it.

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2008 10:34 pm Title: Closing The Deal

OH MY GOD.
THAT IS TOTALLY WHAT I WANT PAM TO SAY AT THEIR WEDDING!
"Absolutely I do."
You mind reader, you!!!

Also, I LOVE your screenname. It is made of amazing.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2008 05:32 pm Title: Closing The Deal

Now THAT is a spur of the moment proposal I'd like to see!!!  Nicely done, LF.  That'll help take the edge of this 'longest week in the history of the universe'.

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2008 10:41 am Title: Closing The Deal

aww adorable.  I could totally see this happening--although I'm pretty sure the writers wont go this way--we had better be able to see this ass kicking proposal :)

Reviewer: PBandJ09 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2008 06:24 am Title: Closing The Deal

EEEEE! That was so cute and was just...EEEEEE! That pretty much sums up my feelings as I read that. I wish we could have seen that on screen. Amazing Job!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2008 09:25 pm Title: Closing The Deal

Awwwwwww. There is not enough awww in the world. So great!

Reviewer: malaz85 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2008 07:25 pm Title: Closing The Deal

Just as I had envisioned their night ending. I love it!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2008 07:18 pm Title: Closing The Deal

Two reasons why I love you right now, LoveFool:

1.  Then that delicious tumbling into his apartment, still giddy with it...with each other...with possibility...with love and something even better...like; and,

2.  This throaty kind of laugh that felt like it was coming from someone else - someone much sexier and worldly - bubbled up out of her as she'd felt him up in the car...her hand easing up his thigh, like she was somebody else. Wow!  What an image! 

Hot damn I love this story! 

Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2008 07:02 pm Title: Closing The Deal

THAT was really sweet. Damn the documentary format that keeps us from seeing these moments!

Reviewer: oobadnama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2008 06:55 pm Title: Closing The Deal

Sigh. This made me all kinds of happy. I love it when awesome episodes inspire awesome fic and this is definitely no exception. I think I've reread it like three nows time.. so great. Heee. Awesome job. :)

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