Reviews For Para Sentir
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Reviewer: bkwrm Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2009 10:22 am Title: one

This is such a great story! The title is so fitting for story and I loved how you wrote the five senses into moments between Jim and Pam. It's cute, tender, sweet, and...well...sensual at the same time. It's hard to decide which one I like the most since each is special in its own way.

Thanks for writing this!

Reviewer: honeypioneer Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2008 03:17 pm Title: one

This has a really beautiful simplicity about it that makes it totally Jim and Pam. Good job!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I guess I'm a little Thoreau - "Simplicity, simplicity, simplicity!"  *laughs*

Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2008 07:59 pm Title: one

Very nice.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2008 06:55 pm Title: one

mmm... just lovely.  I especially like how their hands just fit together and how the taste of him leaves her craving more. 


Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: standinginthedoorway Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2008 02:07 pm Title: one

So sweet! Nice work.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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