Date: June 05, 2008 07:18 am Title: Chapter 1
I really am enjoying this sad story. Life isn't always fair but I love the way Jim/Pam are working it out. Look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. I love the angst, and the fluff so hopefully I can come up with some at one point?
Date: June 04, 2008 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
This was your best chapter yet, iwantphillyjim! It flowed so well. You just keep getting better! You've conjured up some really lovely images of new father and baby son.
Author's Response: Aw, you've got me all blushin' over here...Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it. I love new dad Jim, he's so sweet.
Date: June 04, 2008 06:43 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow! Just read the last two chapters, iwantphillyjim. What a whirlwind of activity! Really good job. I was swept up in the action!
Author's Response: Thank you! and thanks for reading, hope you enjoy the new chapter, less action, but hopefully it satisfies.
Date: June 01, 2008 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh my god.(jaw drops)That is just mean.
but on the other hand. It looks like now it's just Jim and Pam and a baby...
Author's Response: Please, pick up the jaw, it won't be so bad next chapter, or will it? Hmm.. I wonder. Thanks for reading!
Date: June 01, 2008 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh no, poor Lisa! And poor Jim! Woow, you've created a hell of a situation here. I mean, don't get me wrong, I really love this story and your writing's really good, but what are they going to do?! I hope you'll update soon, because inspite of the dramatic contents, I'm really enjoying this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and your review, I'm glad you like it, it is quite the pickle they're in. But come on, sometimes angst is just fun...I promise it will bring good things.
Date: June 01, 2008 11:27 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow. I wonder if Jim will blame himself for Lisa's death? This is a very compelling story. Looking forward to your next update. :)
Author's Response: Hey thanks for reading, I don't think Jim will feel responsible, we'll just have to see.
Date: May 18, 2008 04:13 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm really interested in this story. I'm kind of curious how Pam's going to handle the whole situation, especially when the baby arrives. I love your Jim, he's so sweet! I hope you'll update soon, this is a great story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really enjoying writing this, I have the next 2 chapters nearly done, so updating soon!
Date: May 14, 2008 04:57 am Title: Chapter 3
i've been reading this since you started but haven't had a chance to review until now. this story is really well-written and i love it! you know how to grasp this subject very well along with the Jim & Pam characters. but i can't imagine how stressful this would be to Jim! I love how he went to Pam for advice and it's making things good between them. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: I like your stories too, thanks! I've never had to deal with this subject personally, but I think it makes for an interesting story. Glad you like it!
Date: May 13, 2008 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
You're moving at quite a clip, iwantphillyjim! I know I certainly appreciate quick updates, and I know it must not be easy. You've got an interesting concept here, and I'm interested in its progression. If I may offer a little helpful advice, I think you would really benefit from a beta. If you click on MTT's home page, there are links that direct you to the gods and goddesses who help bring us all the great stories that we enjoy so much. Please know that I don't mean to put you down. I think your enthusiasm is awesome, and I'd love to see more from you. I just think a beta would make a good story even better! Keep up the good work : )
Author's Response: Thanks! I have a beta now, Elly ROX! hope you continue to enjoy reading, I love this story right now.
Date: May 13, 2008 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
You've got me hooked with this story. Every 20-somethings nightmare. I hope this Lisa chick doesn't make a play for Jim once the get in such tight quarters. He seems so vulnerable in your story that he might just fall for it. Pam better stake her ground fast!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review, sorry I took forever to respond. I'm glad you like it. Keep reading, it gets interesting my next 2 chaps are nearly done.
Date: May 13, 2008 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
I gotta know what is going to happen next! Keep 'er coming- this is a good story!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I will be churning out the chapters, my beta has the next two, I've been bombarding the poor girl :)...Glad you like it.