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Reviewer: Pan_cake_Cats Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 09, 2018 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is beautiful. A new favorite of mine. Thank you

Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2010 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

How have I never seen this story before? It's beautiful. Even four years later.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2006 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this!  Excellent job!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2006 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm so glad to see this posted here.  I read it when it was rec'd on TWoP but I'm not sure it was reviewed. 

I'm a big fan of "Jim and Pam take it slow" pieces and you've done it absolutely beautifully. 

Reviewer: janelle Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2006 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was beautiful, and I almost cried at the end.

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2006 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is seriously good. Loved the tone and flow of it. It has a nice edge  - by turns raw and sexy, but quite poignant too. Especially liked Mrs. Ramirez - great image of her whispering to Pam, and Jim wondering what she sees when she looks at him...just really hits a great note.

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2006 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

loved this--the little moments that you captured here that together add up to the progression of their relationship. love how you story was in turns vague & detailed, and super loved the image of jim waiting for pam the night before his move and the insecurities that stayed with him for a while once she moved in with him.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2006 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Jim sleeping on the stoop the night before he leaves Scranton was so very sad, but the happy ending made up for it!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2006 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

I reviewed this on LJ, I believe, but it is still wonderful.  Great job! :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2006 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm so glad you posted this here. It is wonderful.

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