Date: May 30, 2008 12:23 pm Title: Opportunity knocks.
Love it! It's nice to see that angsty romance back in the office. I wasn't expecting Josh to be in this chapter so that was very cool. And oh, yeah, this is very funny. Thought that might be something that I should mention.
Date: May 27, 2008 04:58 pm Title: Cold Open
So it took me a bit to discover this but I'm really liking it. I really dig Natalie (if only for the Boston/Steelers love, hee) and I don't really mind the Jim!crush she has because, totally understandable and the friendship between them is really nice.. love how you rooted it in their love of sports and their mutual sense of humor. Am really looking forward to what else you have in store for us because it's been really awesome thus far. :)
Date: May 19, 2008 03:56 pm Title: Opportunity knocks.
I felt a surge of jealousy or Pam, but I'm happy that Natalie finally found out about her. Kinda switcharoo (except Pam and Jim aren't breaking up :) ).
I do like the idea of two Jims though, what could be better?
Date: May 19, 2008 01:53 pm Title: Cold Open
I really enjoyed this (and The Mob), Nightswept! And unlike most Jam fans, I'm okay with a little Natalie/Jim sexual tension! Curious to see where you go with it. You've really captured all of their voices, too. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! My biggest concern was making sure the characters stay true to how we see them on the actual show. Because I'm apparently a hardcore fan, I've geeked out and recognized all of the small quirks like Michael and his use of the words "Just" when he's aggravated. "Why don't you just-" "No, just- Ugh." Haha. I need to get a life, I know.
Date: May 19, 2008 08:07 am Title: Cold Open
Love your two, new Office scripts! You've got character voice down pitch perfect, and your humor is right in line with what we see every Thursday night on our televisions. I really felt like I was reading an actual script for next season, as opposed to fanfic. It was that good. I also particularly liked how Pam hasn't been in the office, because I've always been intrigued to see how exactly that would alter the overall dynamic. It's been really interesting to watch your take on that. You also do THs especially well. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm a little late catching up on these reviews, but I just wanted to say thank you for the comment. I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far!
Date: May 17, 2008 03:03 pm Title: Cold Open
I love this story. It's holding me over for sure! Keep up the updates!
Author's Response: Thank you! For some reason, I've just had story ideas coming out the wazoo over the weekend, so there should be plenty of updates throughout the week. :)
Date: May 17, 2008 02:11 pm Title: Cold Open
I read "The Mob" and absolutely adored Natalie; "The Crush" is setting up to be sooo awesome too! Thanks! I'm loving so far!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad Natalie's had such a positive response so far, I was worried people would be threatening me to keep her away from Jim... Slowly but surely we'll start learning more about her and her little quirks.