Reviews For The Crush
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Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 11:10 am Title: Opportunity knocks.

Ooh, a Josh/Natalie romance?  Nice.

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 11:00 am Title: Girl talk.

Oh Phyllis.  That's downright evil.

Excellent recall of the computer versus Dwight.  I know I've already said this but...this is so much fun!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 10:52 am Title: Cold Open

"Jan said I can't help pick out the name"

HA!  I should hope not.  Honestly.  Hee, this is so much fun!

Reviewer: fashion_show_at_lunch Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 10:12 pm Title: Opportunity knocks.

oh yay! Natalie has a boy now! I was really worried that she was going to try and steal Pam's boy. I actually like Natalie a lot, I hope that she and Josh hit it off.

Reviewer: Ellie Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2008 10:19 pm Title: End tag

I'm so glad you finally updated!!! Can't wait for the next episode

Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2008 12:23 pm Title: Opportunity knocks.

Love it! It's nice to see that angsty romance back in the office. I wasn't expecting Josh to be in this chapter so that was very cool. And oh, yeah, this is very funny. Thought that might be something that I should mention.

Reviewer: oobadnama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 04:58 pm Title: Cold Open

So it took me a bit to discover this but I'm really liking it. I really dig Natalie (if only for the Boston/Steelers love, hee) and I don't really mind the Jim!crush she has because, totally understandable and the friendship between them is really nice.. love how you rooted it in their love of sports and their mutual sense of humor. Am really looking forward to what else you have in store for us because it's been really awesome thus far. :)

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2008 03:56 pm Title: Opportunity knocks.

I felt a surge of jealousy or Pam, but I'm happy that Natalie finally found out about her. Kinda switcharoo (except Pam and Jim aren't breaking up :) ).

I do like the idea of two Jims though, what could be better? 

Reviewer: wendolf Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2008 01:53 pm Title: Cold Open

I really enjoyed this (and The Mob), Nightswept! And unlike most Jam fans, I'm okay with a little Natalie/Jim sexual tension! Curious to see where you go with it. You've really captured all of their voices, too. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! My biggest concern was making sure the characters stay true to how we see them on the actual show. Because I'm apparently a hardcore fan, I've geeked out and recognized all of the small quirks like Michael and his use of the words "Just" when he's aggravated. "Why don't you just-" "No, just- Ugh." Haha. I need to get a life, I know.

Reviewer: Cricket03 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2008 08:07 am Title: Cold Open

Love your two, new Office scripts! You've got character voice down pitch perfect, and your humor is right in line with what we see every Thursday night on our televisions. I really felt like I was reading an actual script for next season, as opposed to fanfic. It was that good. I also particularly liked how Pam hasn't been in the office, because I've always been intrigued to see how exactly that would alter the overall dynamic. It's been really interesting to watch your take on that. You also do THs especially well. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I'm a little late catching up on these reviews, but I just wanted to say thank you for the comment. I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far!

Reviewer: untherapy Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2008 07:59 am Title: Guy talk

these are great episodes! Are you secretly B.J. Novak?

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 06:44 pm Title: Guy talk

Ok I'm loving this story or episode or whatever, its wonderful, and I can really see all of this happening.

But, Natalie does seem a lot like a certain ex of Jim's. Hmm 

Reviewer: missjasadin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 06:02 pm Title: Guy talk

Jim and Natalie are good as friends but NO MORE.
Have jim finally propose.
LOVING THIS so far. Just hoping that nothing happens with jim and Nat - cause im really liking her :)

Reviewer: bashert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 03:01 pm Title: Girl talk.

I really love this so far. And not just because Natalie is a Steelers fan (here we go Steelers!)

I have a feeling that Natalie is going to be a little let down when she finds out about Pam...

Reviewer: missjasadin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2008 05:30 pm Title: Cold Open

i love them.

what about this 'crush' though? i hope its not going to mess with JAM

Author's Response: I know... I don't think I could ever mess with JAM, but we'll see what happens... :)

Reviewer: Wendy Blue Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2008 03:24 pm Title: Cold Open

This was great!  Really looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: Ellie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2008 03:03 pm Title: Cold Open

I love this story. It's holding me over for sure! Keep up the updates!

Author's Response: Thank you! For some reason, I've just had story ideas coming out the wazoo over the weekend, so there should be plenty of updates throughout the week. :)

Reviewer: Snarkland Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2008 02:11 pm Title: Cold Open


I read "The Mob" and absolutely adored Natalie; "The Crush" is setting up to be sooo awesome too!  Thanks!  I'm loving so far! 

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad Natalie's had such a positive response so far, I was worried people would be threatening me to keep her away from Jim... Slowly but surely we'll start learning more about her and her little quirks.

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