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Reviewer: Jewelsy Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 02:38 am Title: Things are not always as they seem

I loved it. I totally see Jim saying "Right Whatever". Super cute and it puts a whole new spin on the season finale. Thank you. I'm writing one where Jim proposes farther down the line but I love to read all the proposals. Yours is wonderful.

Reviewer: honeypioneer Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2008 08:40 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

Great take on the proposal! Wonderful and original...nicely done :)

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2008 08:03 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

I've been pondering this concept since Chair Model aired. You did a spectacular job bringing it to life.

Thank you and keep writing...please.

Reviewer: beermestrength Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 11:09 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

Such a great idea! Well done.

Reviewer: officerules06 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 08:20 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

loved it, stl! oh how i wish this were true. the writers must be kind to us!!! ~fnor/islut :-)

Reviewer: missjasadin Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 06:09 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

awesome. i hope this comes true!1

Reviewer: MelBal Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 05:18 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

I really like this. Very nice. Jim proposing in the parking lot to a fireworks display just seems out of character--more like something Roy would do. Jim only spending a few moments at work to plan out his proposal would not produced the ass-kicking we were promised. There's been other post Goodbye Toby proposal stories, but this one makes me the happiest.

Reviewer: Aurorabee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 04:21 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

Awwwwwww, if only!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 02:55 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

Wow!  I remember you making this comment!  What a wonderful and original take on the S4 "Proposal that wasn't".

I loved this memory:

He thought back...he had promised the world and the diamond shimmered under the night sky as they stood on his back porch. It was simple...everything and nothing, and perfect in its imperfection as he nearly slipped on the dewy planks.

Those words painted such a simple and beautiful picture. *sigh*

I'm so glad you've gotten back on the fanfic horse.  I hope to see more from you this summer, young man.

Reviewer: kerber1920 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 02:25 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay :)  (can you tell I'm super uber happy excited you listened and wrote this!?!?)

Fantastically awesome, sweet and so so in tune on our Jim and Pam.  It's SO nice to have you throw your .02 in this place again :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 02:14 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

Aw!  What a great idea!  So cute.  Thank you for making me smile on a rainy Sunday (plus, I'm still smarting from Thursday night). 

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 02:08 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

No, it hasn't been done, and I really liked this! Nice switcharoo.

Reviewer: elly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 02:04 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

this is a great idea! You've done a good job with this!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 01:53 pm Title: Things are not always as they seem

Now THIS is a hoot!  What a great twist. 

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