Date: June 25, 2009 12:37 pm Title: Week 3
wow. i realized halfway through the first chapter that i'd already read all of this, yet i re-read it because it's so cute and fun to read. i can't wait to see that next chapter, and i'm just about to read it. so excited. i'll make sure it review, please write a fifth chapter, i'm hoping for 40 total just like you promised! 10/10!
Date: July 16, 2008 07:34 am Title: Week 4
*big smile* Now THAT was fun, absolutelyido. You're on a roll now. Really looking forward to following this as you add chapters and Pam's pregnancy progresses. Nice job. Funny thing--I'm a huge Wegmans fan. As I was reading this, I'm envisioning Pam in the bakery and pharmacy sections of our local Wegmans. Gave me a chuckle : )
Author's Response: thanks!! i live in atlanta and we have no wegman's down here, so i was just kinda making that up and hoping that it was right. i feel better now that you said that :-)
Date: July 08, 2008 05:29 pm Title: Week 3
Oh very sweet. I'm so glad you continued with this story. You hadn't posted in a while. I know how busy things can get. (sorry to hear about your flood) I started doing two stories at once and barely had time to do them. I felt bad for not keeping up with them in a timely fashion as well, But you write when inspiration strikes right?
Anyway back to your story. Can't deny slight disapointment that there was no smut in this chapter, but I know there can't be smut in every chapter of a story.
I really loved that Jim said he wanted to marry her from the moment he saw her. NICE!
I soooo want to know how they will find out about the baby. You keep me hanging on.
(I'd love to hear your thoughts on my story or stories, if you get a chance to read them.)
Hope you post again soon.
Date: June 10, 2008 09:23 am Title: Week 2
Once again, very nice! I could really feel the love. I love the way you have Jim doting on Pam. Pretty good steaminess factor. I would love it if you would describe more in detail the little physical things like their breathing, heart beat, so on and so forth. When will she know? Can't wait for the next chapter. Will all your chapters include smut? If so: NICE!
Date: May 24, 2008 09:16 pm Title: Week 1
You were kind enough to reveiw my work on After the firworks so I looked you up to do the same.
This is your first attemp? It's good! Very cute with a little bit of smut mixed in. Just what I like. I will keep reading your story hope you will do the same with mine.
After the fireworks is my first attempt at fan fic too.
I love that in your story Pam is really getting recognized for her art work. Keep up the good work.