Reviews For Saying Goodbye
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Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2008 08:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Hmm. Almost angsty.  Of course we all would want them to say so, so much more to each other. But really, what could they say. Your story is probably very true to the characters, and the situation.   This could be a good challenge. 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2008 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Really sweet, sad.
Only thin is you say seven year routine. I am not sure if it is canon anywhere, but to me, I always imagined them as only workin togeht 4-5 years max before that. But that could just be my personal opinion!

But besides the time differential, that 'goodbye' routine is sweet and them.

Hmm... Casino Night took place in May. Jim was in Stamford by June. Why is Pam wearin a scarf?

So sad. I am not sure how those days really happened, but it was sad and certainly awkward between them.
Good story.  

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