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Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 08:44 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen

Speechless *sob*

Author's Response: There, there. It'll get better.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 08:36 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen

No garbage ilif.  I want Jim and Pam together but not while she's still married to Roy.  Not in keeping with who I think Pam is I guess.

Love this story to bits and thanks for updating so regularly. 



Author's Response: Glad you're liking it. :) And I guess updates have become my speciality haha.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 08:21 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

I really feel for both of them.  It's so heartbreaking.  Someone is going to have to crack and spill their guts soon.

Author's Response: The cracking will happen, guts shall be spilled. They just need to get over themselves first.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 07:43 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen

Just take off the heavy ring already!

Seriously, another fine chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 07:00 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen

Thanks again for the quick updates. You are great! Garbage??? OMG, NO. This is such a beautifully written, poignant chapter. Made my heart break for Jim and for Pam. I can picture them standing at the sink staring into each others' eyes as Pam longs for things to be different....and Jim aches for a chance to be with her. More soon, PLEASE!!!

Author's Response: Well I'm glad the angsty angst didn't inspire garbage throwing and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I can definitely promise more soon. :)

Reviewer: 09imagine09 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 06:51 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen

Whoa, poor, poor Jim! Pam just do the right thing here already!! I'm totally hooked on this story, and I seriously can't wait till you update the next chapter! I do love the angst, but I'm also really looking forward to some serious fluff! Great job once again!

Author's Response: The fluff will happen at some point. I would be a monster otherwise, I think. ;)

Reviewer: hues8 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 06:46 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen

Ugh, that was heartbreaking. But so, so good!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, despite its heartbreakingness. :)

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 06:56 pm Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know

Lisahoo is right! Extra points for that sweet Charlie Brown reference! You can just feel the tension mounting in this story.  I can't wait for the volcano of emotions to erupt!!!

Author's Response: The volcano blows its top eventually. And, if I may say so (and I may be biased), I think it's a pretty big explosion. I hope so anyway! :)

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 12:38 pm Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know

ooo the other stuff. I can't wait

Author's Response: The other stuff will be up soon. :)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 12:18 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Wow, I miss an update somehow.  Thanks for getting them out so fast.  This story has quickly become my favorite.  I feel for both of them.

Author's Response: Timely updates are always a good thing. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: WeBrokeHisBrain Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 10:37 am Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know

okay, this is more agonizing than booze cruise was. He always has so many openings but just refuses to go there. You're staying very true to character (although I wish that Pam will start using some of her braveness that she must have learned from Maddie by now!)

I'm eager for more!

Author's Response: More soon. You can hold me to that. Pam's a little slow with the braveness, but she'll get there.

Reviewer: Jinxcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 10:26 am Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know

Hurry, Hurry!! Do we get any of Pam's POV?

Author's Response: A little Pam POV happens in the next chapter. She has her fair share of angsty thoughts as well.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 10:24 am Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know

Oooo!  "Other stuff!"  Squeeeeee! 

Author's Response: The other stuff is big stuff, trust me.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 10:18 am Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know

aww, points for quoting Charlie Brown  ;o)

Just don't let Pam pull the football away as he's running up to kick it.



Author's Response: Jim fares a little better than Charlie Brown.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 07:52 am Title: i wanna know your plans, and how involved in them i am

Oh, poor Doug!  He's a Jim-in-training.  I love the image of Jim on the front steps and all the details surround it--very nicely portrayed. 

Author's Response: Thank you. That chapter was a sort of last minute idea, so I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 06:44 am Title: should i give up, or should i just keep chasing pavements?

Ahhhh! This chapter is soooo great! I loved it! Very well done.  This story makes me very happy!

Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm really happy people are enjoying reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 01:58 am Title: i wanna know your plans, and how involved in them i am

Jim. JIM is your type, Beesly. Jim is EVERYBODY'S type.

Author's Response: He is indeed.

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 01:54 am Title: should i give up, or should i just keep chasing pavements?

That Maddie is a sharp one.

Author's Response: She knows what's going on. And thankfully she isn't shy about it.

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 01:51 am Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?

Aww. Angst makes me sad, but it's gotta be there! Plus, it helps when it's written so well. ;)

Author's Response: And for me this is like Angst Lite, same great taste, fewer tears. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 01:49 am Title: i'll be your mirror, reflect what you are in case you don't know

"It's Disneyland though, isn't it? I figured it out, so now you have to pretend it's not."

I love Jim. Even if this is an even more fictional version of him. Still, I love how you write him. :D

Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm also partial to Jim. He's niiiiice.

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 01:46 am Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float

Aww, fluff, fluff, fluff, the world runs on fluff!

a. I love All I Want is You

b. What is the first scene from Jaws?

c. Maddie had good taste. ;]

Author's Response: To answer B: In the first scene of Jaws, two people go skinny dipping in the ocean and one of them is eaten by a shark. So... not fun.

Reviewer: Ellie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2008 08:07 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

I haven't reviewed this story in a while... But it's not because I don't love it, there have just been so many updates! And that is a very good thing. Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Updates are indeed good and I'm glad you like them. :)

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2008 06:50 pm Title: i wanna know your plans, and how involved in them i am

aw cute

Author's Response: Thank you. :) I try.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2008 06:48 pm Title: i wanna know your plans, and how involved in them i am

Oh, Miss Pam.  So much time spent away from Doofus Roy.  Let me guess, he brought the jet-skis to California?

Author's Response: He probably did. Now I'm a little sad that I didn't add in Pam showing Jim the garage and saying "This is where the jet-skis would go if Roy hadn't taken them on his work trip." haha.

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2008 04:18 pm Title: should i give up, or should i just keep chasing pavements?

I just got caught up on this story and wow! It's great. The dynamic between them is so perfect here and I can't wait to read more! Update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. And updates will remain lightning fast, I promise. :)

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