Date: June 03, 2008 09:35 pm Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
More! Soon please!
Author's Response: You can count on it. :)
Date: June 03, 2008 09:14 pm Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
you are awesome! Thanks for the rapid updates.
You've written such amazing angst here. And you're hiding just enough of how each of them feels that I wonder what each of them are actually expecting will come out of this week.
I also like how you're keeping Pam's thoughts of Roy away. She must feel very conflicted that she's invited Jim while Roy is away, but obviously she's trying very hard not to think about that. And Jim's trying so hard to convince himself he can be just friends, I can totally buy that.
At the end, I was waiting for her to say "Uh, no, I didn't ... I didn't marry Roy" Damn it. But I still have hope that they didn't actually sign the wedding certificate or something ;-)
oh and Maddie is a great character, I hope we get to see more of her.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. There's a lot going on beneath the surface, but that's just Jim and Pam, isn't it? Maddie will be around a little more, I can promise that.
Date: June 03, 2008 08:49 pm Title: i don't believe all that you said was yesterday
I am thoroughly enjoying thsi story! I can tell I am going to REALLY like Maddie!
Author's Response: Thank you. I know I enjoy her. But I could possibly MAYBE be biased.
Date: June 03, 2008 03:35 pm Title: i don't believe all that you said was yesterday
How could you possibly end it there?
Author's Response: I could be evil.
Date: June 03, 2008 01:40 pm Title: i don't believe all that you said was yesterday
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Continue, please...
Author's Response: Thank you. :) And I shall.
Date: June 03, 2008 01:29 pm Title: i don't believe all that you said was yesterday
Yes, the voice of wisdom from Maddie!
Never, ever give up. [/Michael]
Author's Response: Somebody has to nudge these crazy kids in the right direction.
9 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2008 01:00 pm Title: i don't believe all that you said was yesterday
More! I always look forward to these chapter updates. Keep them coming!
Author's Response: I plan to! Have no fears about that.
Date: June 02, 2008 11:24 pm Title: but he stays all the same, waits for you and then sees you through
awwww. the puppy. and while pam was doing her hair I could just picture Jim staring at her with just a look of love and longing in his eyes it could melt you.
Also, you were right about the update! This was a nice surprise.
Author's Response: This chapter was actually a last minute idea that just sort of popped out of nowhere, so I'm glad people have liked it.
Date: June 02, 2008 08:23 pm Title: but he stays all the same, waits for you and then sees you through
Awww! Jim and Pam fluff makes the world go round. I beg you to continue writing.
Author's Response: I needed to throw some fluff in. The angst, she overwhelmed me! A little bit of fluff never hurt anyone.
Date: June 02, 2008 08:11 pm Title: you're so inviting and i'm easily led
Love! He said love!
HE. SAID. LOVE!!! :D :D :D
Author's Response: Cause he does. He sooooooo does.
Date: June 02, 2008 08:07 pm Title: make me believe you mean this
I. Want. Pam's. Job.
Roy is leaving? Interesante... GO JIM, GO! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE?
Author's Response: My job is terrible, so I'm pretty much jealous of Pam. Her fictional life is cooler than my real one.
Date: June 02, 2008 08:00 pm Title: and i wish i could be with you, but you're so far away
Ahhh! He said with love! Score! I am reading on...
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed that. I know I did.
Date: June 02, 2008 07:58 pm Title: am i still your charm, or am i just bad luck?
Aw, I love Pam. You write her so well.
I can totally see her working in an antique shop. You are a genius.
Author's Response: Genius? Well, I could get used to hearing that, haha. I'm glad you're enjoying Pam's new career (and the story, obviously). :)
Date: June 02, 2008 09:38 am Title: yours is the first face that i saw. i think i was blind before i met you.
yay I can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: One should be coming soon. They always do. :)
Date: June 02, 2008 09:30 am Title: please remember all of the things i never got a chance to say
yay another Abby (that's my name) I love this story!
Author's Response: It was the only name I could find that I felt like really fit the character. So, it's a good name. And I'm glad you're liking the story.
Date: June 02, 2008 09:27 am Title: they pour out to paper, it's all for you
I love Jim's letter. it seems so real. fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: June 02, 2008 09:25 am Title: i'll do everything i can to keep you by my side
ooo I love the house!
Author's Response: When I saw that picture, it was just a whole new wave of inspiration. Even though the real house is in the wrong state, haha.
Date: June 02, 2008 09:22 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend
so I've been seeing this on the recent page for a while and finally decided to read it. I love it! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. :)
Date: June 02, 2008 08:22 am Title: yours is the first face that i saw. i think i was blind before i met you.
What a loaded last line to this chapter!!! Brilliant!
Author's Response: Plenty more loaded lines to come. Impossible for there not to be with these two.
Date: June 02, 2008 08:19 am Title: make me believe you mean this
I have been noticing the graduation from the two of them simply signing their names at the end of the letters to 'with love' and now 'love'. Also, how much they miss each other is becoming more and more evident with each letter. Jim is so going to California with this week of vacation time. I know it!
Author's Response: The 'with love' to 'love' transition was something I was hoping people would pick up on. Yay. :)
Date: June 02, 2008 08:05 am Title: yours is the first face that i saw. i think i was blind before i met you.
I just am really loving this and your quick updating. Looking forward to more!!!
Author's Response: I always try to update as quickly as possible. I hate it when I get into a story and then am left wondering for weeks (or in terrible cases, months). I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 01, 2008 10:19 pm Title: make me believe you mean this
I love how romantic this is. I can totally see Jim and Pam being more honest with each other by letters than they would be if they were face-to-face. I really hope you update this soon because I really enjoy this story and it brightens my day up!
Author's Response: I'm glad it brightens your day. Sometimes it brightens mine when I'm writing it (when it's a no-writer's block kind of day). :)
Date: June 01, 2008 02:45 pm Title: make me believe you mean this
The 'garbage punch' is a good rule to live by. Mine is never to drink anything served out of a washing machine. Also a true story. (Buy the plane ticket, Jim!!!)
Author's Response: Washing machine? Wow, I'll have to keep that one in mind (even though I don't think that one comes up that often).
Date: June 01, 2008 02:27 pm Title: make me believe you mean this
No, no, no Jim! You don't have to think about this!! Just go!
So sweet he puts a picture of him and Pam on his desk!
Great job, please keep going!!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) More coming soon, no need to worry about that.
Date: June 01, 2008 11:33 am Title: they pour out to paper, it's all for you
Love the heartwrenching jim moment after he writes the letter.
Author's Response: Well, it wouldn't be Jim if he wasn't a little angsty here. Glad you liked it.