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Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 10:46 am Title: if love is a labor i'll slave 'til the end : epilogue

And this story was quite awesome!  Bravo!  Looking forward to what you have in store next, carbondalien.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 10:42 am Title: if love is a labor i'll slave 'til the end : epilogue

This was my first large-scale JAM fic, although it shorn't be my last. I have plenty of ideas. Plenty

Best news I've heard all day!!! This was a great story.  I can't wait to hear from you again!  Thanks for a great story!!!



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing (and being awesome)! Glad you enjoyed this little story of mine. :)

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 10:26 am Title: if love is a labor i'll slave 'til the end : epilogue

aw such a perfect end! :) great fic! you did a fantastic job! I'm going to miss it.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 10:22 am Title: if love is a labor i'll slave 'til the end : epilogue

Absolutely wonderful. Even though the painful parts. I really look forward to your next story. So you should probably get working on that...like now. :P well...not entirely kidding.

Author's Response: Haha, I'm working on some things. Glad you liked it, even those angsty bits. :)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 07:35 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Perfect.  I am going to be so sad to see this one end.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: absolutelyido Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 07:29 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

i am in love with this story.  awesome job!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 06:23 am Title: old paint is peeling, this is that fresh feeling

She wants to remember the moment she became new. Great line.

I'll be sad to see this go, too.  It was thoroughly enjoyable from start to finish.



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 04:26 am Title: old paint is peeling, this is that fresh feeling

This was a wonderful story. I loved every word of it. Nicely done. I hope you start another soon. Thanks for the quick updates. I woke up every morning and read a chapter before I went to work and had another one waiting on me when I got home. Pure heaven. :)

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it (although on my end, the writing bit was a little painful haha). :)

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 04:16 am Title: old paint is peeling, this is that fresh feeling

This is a good story. I really like it. For me, you could have totally wrapped it up at the end of the last chapter and I would have been very happy.  Nevertheless, I'm sticking through to the end with this one. Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Sunshinegirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 11:17 pm Title: old paint is peeling, this is that fresh feeling

Ahhhhmazing work. You've wrapped up this story VERY nicely.. cuteee fluff but still realistic. =)

I will be sad to see it go as well but I enjoyed every chapter along the way. Beautiful job.

Author's Response: Thank you. And thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 11:09 pm Title: old paint is peeling, this is that fresh feeling

Yay!

I've thoroughly enjoyed this story start to finish. It will be tragic when the epilogue rolls around. Hope you write more for this site, though!

Author's Response: I'm planning to write more. I've got a nice little folder of unfinished stuff and some ideas rolling around in my head.

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 10:47 pm Title: old paint is peeling, this is that fresh feeling

aw me too. cute chapter

Author's Response: A little cute after the angst is always good.

Reviewer: Jinxcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 09:42 pm Title: old paint is peeling, this is that fresh feeling

I think we will all be sad to see it go!

Author's Response: It's been quite a ride.

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 06:29 pm Title: you were waving flags that bared the colors of your love

aw :D!!!!! yay! yay! yay! My happiness is here!

Author's Response: Yes, finally! haha :)

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 06:26 pm Title: you were waving flags that bared the colors of your love

Wonderful chapter, this is a very good story, I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 05:00 pm Title: you were waving flags that bared the colors of your love

Awww! I loved the crap out of this chapter. Big speeches from Pam rock my world.

I know there's a happy ending and all, but... are you gonna add more? I love this story. =]

Author's Response: Pam is a big speech kind of gal. The end is up now, so hope you like it. :)

Reviewer: CHT 8635 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 03:39 pm Title: you were waving flags that bared the colors of your love

Awesome chapter!!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 03:36 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

You made my day coming home and finding another update.  It was a good one too.  Thanks!

Author's Response: I try. Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Jinxcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 12:43 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Very nice chapter. Although I got two chapter updates in a row and was very excited to read two chapters and almost cried when I saw it was just one. Love the story! You really know how to keep people invested!

Author's Response: There was a mistake the first time I posted the chapter. For some reason it cut off halfway through Pam's big speech, so I obviously had to fix that problem. Hopefully the ending will make up for it. :)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 12:30 pm Title: you were waving flags that bared the colors of your love

Pam getting her divorce -- yeah, that should be fun for no one.


Author's Response: Divorces are always a carnival of fun times. Anything with lawyers is sure to be a good time.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 11:05 am Title: you were waving flags that bared the colors of your love

*NanReg exhales* My heart is racing!  I love the dialog--so honest. 



Author's Response: Thank you. :) More should be up soon.

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 08:21 am Title: could you love someone completely? and, yes, by someone i mean me.

Arrrrrrrgh, you're killing me!! These short chapters are going to be the death of me. Please be gentle as I go into the light.

Author's Response: You'll make it out okay, I promise.

Reviewer: Sunshinegirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 07:29 am Title: could you love someone completely? and, yes, by someone i mean me.

GO AFTER HER!!!!!!

Oh man, you made this chapter 10 times better than I thought. I figured he'd run into her arms and kiss her and the end.. but you've spun this into even more awesome-ness. =) Love it.

Author's Response: I like to add a little twist now and again. Glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 06:25 am Title: could you love someone completely? and, yes, by someone i mean me.

Fantastic.  I'd call it a step in the right direction.  Come on, kids.  Get it together! 

Author's Response: I agree 100%. Those crazy kids.

Reviewer: CHT 8635 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 01:24 am Title: could you love someone completely? and, yes, by someone i mean me.

Oh it has to be enough!!!! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. :) And thanks for reviewing.

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