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Reviewer: NoFireworks Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2009 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jim Gets the Call

Ahh, why'd you stop!? Please continue. :)

Reviewer: Jewelsy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jim Gets the Call

You were kind to review my story After the fireworks so I looked you up and found yours.

I love this idea that Jim and Pam will be together in NY in season five. I will continue to read if you post new chapters. I look forward to your individual take on this idea. Cloverfield huh, can't wait to read that twist. If you need a beta to help with the writing I would be glad to oblige. It's fun writing JAM fic isn't it?

Author's Response: That would be great. If you could be my beta, I would be honored. It's just summer is hectic right now. How shall I get those chapters to ye? (:

Reviewer: TotoDarling Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2008 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jim Gets the Call

I shook my moniter. A lot.

Author's Response:

Thanks A-M. (:

 we didn't even get to that part yet. hahahahaha. i'll tell you when.

Reviewer: lifeafterlife Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 08:42 am Title: Chapter 1: Jim Gets the Call

Love the idea! Once I saw "cloverfeild crossover" I flipped a switch. Far out. You really got the characters down well - specifically Michael, which is definitely diffifcult for some; Jim and Pam had flawless dialogue. I'd say the only thing to work on is sentence structure; while your characters character, your writing seems a little quick and gives me a tough time visualizing the story. All in all, though, I'd say you've done a great job. I'm really excited! Cloverfeild was such a badass movie!

Author's Response: I thank you for your constructive criticism.rnWith sentence structure, see, I'm a 16 year old JAM fan. Ha! I just got out of school and the english sentence structure fails me right now. haha. But yes, I will work on this in future chapters. I hope you keep reading to get the full effect of 'Officefield' mania! :DrnrnThanks again.rn[p.s.: if you have any specific points that could help me, i'm welcome to ideas!!]

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1: Jim Gets the Call

dear, I thoughly enjoyed this story you've created. reading it over, I can't seem to see any flaws...yet. lol. jk jk. keeping on writing this, babe <333

Author's Response: No flaws yet? Thank you oh great smut reader, you. love youuuu! :)

Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 07:18 am Title: Chapter 1: Jim Gets the Call

I like this idea a lot! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! I'm sure it'll be great just like this one is!

Author's Response: Thanks! That's nice to hear. I'm hoping it will be the perfect amount of comedy, drama, horror, and smut.rnYes, smut will be in this story. I'm hoping to write it with a realistic feel even though i really don't know what it's like. but i read enough of it so hopefully, it'll be alright.rnKeep Reading. I promise it'll get better! Thanks again for the review! :D

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