Date: June 21, 2008 06:58 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Loved this chapter. The Chicken Dance Song and Stairway to Heaven references had me laughing out loud- totally my camp experience. You've captured the excitement that was the camp social really well. I know I learned more about boys and makeup at camp than anywhere else. The slow build of Jim and Pam's relationship is great. I'm really looking forward to what's coming up next!
Author's Response: Hey, EM. Glad you enjoyed it. I am glad you appreciated my rendition of a camp social, because I'll tell you a secret- I've never actually been to one. What I described was based on a few experiences I'd read about and heard of. So I'm glad it resonated. Anyway, thanks for keeping up with it.
Date: June 18, 2008 04:43 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Camp love is sexy, I went to camp a few years in a row, and when I was 15, we had the hottest counselors, most of which were European college students, the best were the UK ones, I never got any camp love unfortunately. I was anti-boy in my teen years. If only boys were more like Jim back then...ah well, one can dream right? Keep up the great work, I am eager for the next chapter. We need Jim and Pam making smores, or in a nice cayack adventure...and of course, mutual skinny dipping.
I'm glad that this story can help bring back your own camp experiences. That was kind of my plan. Camp is an experience that many of us shared, and so I knew it was good and fertile ground to write a fanfic around. I'll try to remember s'mores and...yeah, they're probably be more skinnydipping.
Date: June 18, 2008 10:10 am Title: Chapter Eleven
You definitely still have me as the audience! I just am awful with giving feedback! I'm sorry! But I am definitely still reading and enjoying!
Author's Response: It's great to hear that I still have you. Not that I ever have had you. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying!
Date: June 18, 2008 05:59 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Hi! I just wanted to review to tell you that I love your story. I'm actually horrible and never leave reviews, but I wanted to let you know that I definitely plan on sticking with this story until the end. As a former camper myself, I've found your descriptions of summer camp very realistic and enjoyable. Brings back memories! Anyway, I love your story and I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter!
That's really great! I'm glad that this fic is striking a chord with you. I really wanted it to resonate with the former (and maybe current) camper in all of us. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: June 17, 2008 12:12 pm Title: Chapter Ten
no, I'm guessing he doesn't have a chance... :P Pam's going to cold shoulder him for at least a day...or like 12 years so we can be caught up to the show! There it is! This is a great story :)
Author's Response: Thank you. Thank you for reading. I hope it's not dragging too slowly for you.
Date: June 13, 2008 02:36 pm Title: Chapter Eight
OH come on don't leave it there!!!! I love how you decribed the lake, very visual.
OH come on don't leave it there!!!! <--- That is what she said.
And thank you for your review. That is what I said. I think my beta'er wrote the descriptions of the lake, so thanks go to her! I'll pass them along.
Date: June 11, 2008 09:22 am Title: Chapter One
Finally got a chance to catch up on this story. I like teenage Jim, and I relate to him. I also get distracted by bra straps.
Author's Response: Mucho thanks for reading it, RomanCandle. I'm glad I'm not the only one out there who finds bra straps distracting.