Date: June 11, 2008 01:06 am Title: End tag
"Sorry. When I start drinking, I become an uncontrollable, sexual human being."
That made me laugh out loud. It made me LOL.
Author's Response: Haha. I'm glad you enjoyed Drunk Dwight! Most of all, I'm glad that you are finding it funny, because that's always my biggest concern. I am my worst critic, I guess. :) Thank you!
Date: June 10, 2008 04:07 pm Title: End tag
Great story -- I love reading script fanfics. I think you did a great job w/ the proposal. I was nervous about where you were going w/ Jim and Natalie, but everything looks good for Jim and Pam. (?)
Love Drunk!Dwight and the tag was spot on, true to the characters.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Ah, Jim and Pam own my heart. I wouldn't dare mess with them. ;)
Date: June 08, 2008 05:33 pm Title: End tag
Aw, this was a great one! The proposal was so sweet and so true to them - I think that's how it's actually going to happen on the show - Jim has to just give up the idea of the "perfect" moment. And OMG Dwight/Angela exposed! That was careless of them. And poor Andy. But that was awesome!
Date: June 07, 2008 06:21 pm Title: End tag
i loved it...i felt like pam would be furious that jim didn't propose and finally tell him which would lead him to propose...can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you! Fancy New Beesly is all, "I want a proposal, dammit!" haha
Date: June 07, 2008 05:14 pm Title: End tag
I loved the proposal! (Especially how Pam didn't believe him and Michael interrupting was great, too.) The end was hilarious, I could see it happening on the show! Great episode, can't wait for the next one (#5, I think?)!
Author's Response: Thank you. Yup, I'm "hard at work" on #5. And by "hard at work" I mean procrastinating from doing actual homework. Thanks for the lovely review! I'm glad you liked the proposal. :D
Date: June 07, 2008 04:20 pm Title: End tag
Of course I'm enjoying it. And while in my mind, Jim would have proposed about 2 seconds after Pam's final talking head in Goodbye Toby. But, it's realistic, and I liked it. Update ASAP!
Author's Response: Thank you, Ellie. I'm keeping busy with ep #5, I hope you enjoy it once it's up!
Date: June 05, 2008 06:59 pm Title: Pre-show
I hadn't been reading your episodes before now, but I've just read them all in a row, so I'll just say in one mass review here: these are great! They're so hilarious and clever and definitely feel like the show. I also really love the Natalie character and her friendship with Jim - which is especially well done of you, because I'm normally not fond of original fic characters! - it's made me miss Pam a little less. And I'm looking forward to the Dundies!
Date: June 04, 2008 11:30 am Title: Pre-show
I'm so glad Pam's back. Less glad that for a moment it felt like Natalie was outright replacing her in the office and with Jim. They're banter is kind of the same. I like that it doesn't seem like Pam's all that warm to the idea either. I'm can't wait to see where you take this. I mean...another Dundies!
Date: June 03, 2008 11:47 pm Title: Cold Open
Again, excellence. Oh, I forgot to mention in my last review -- bonus gifts for making Natalie from "outside" of Pittsburgh. I live "outside" of Pittsburgh, so, yay! And I heart Zach Levi as Josh! Wish I grew up next door to the Halpert brothers.
Date: June 03, 2008 07:56 pm Title: Cold Open
DUNDIES!!!!! Oh, that just makes me excited.
As I think others have said about your other fics, I like Natalie, but I'm not all that crazy about the Natalie/Jim relationship. Him not taking Pam's call worried me a little, but that's the only real critique I have.
Overall, these are really hysterical (I laughed out loud a lot) and show an excellent grasp of the characters. Great job!
Date: June 03, 2008 04:18 pm Title: Cold Open
There is something about Natalie that makes me miss Pam more. The fact that Jim looked up to reception the way he would if Pam was just depressing (because Pam's not there) but I'm really loving your stories so far.