Reviews For Time of War
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Reviewer: untherapy Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2008 04:50 am Title: Chapter 2

wow :P I think Dwight would have truly loved fighting in the Civil war. I'd be happy to beta-read for you if you like - I really love old stories like this and I know how hard it can be to write in that style without over-doing it and sounding stilted... Just let me know!

Author's Response: That's awesome thank you!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is brilliant.  You have captured the essence of modern Jim and Pam in James and Pamela.

Oh, and Salted-Beef fingers?  LOL!!

I'm adding this to my favourites.  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Awesome thanks! :)

I'm so glad people are liking these. They're fun to create and I'm learning all sorts of things with the research i.e. salted-beef, it's an epidemic.

Reviewer: dentalhydraplostion Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 2

What an interesting JAM story, must say that I have not see anything like this before but it is very entertaining! Love to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I like to do things a little differently sometimes so I thought I'd see what I could do with this. Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: RomanCandle Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Who knew the Civil War could be so funny? I laughed out loud when I found out Dwight was "Master Sergeant to the Major".

Author's Response: Ha! I sure didn't. Here's hoping I can continue the trend. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: elly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this era in history and you've added Jim and Pam into so seamlessly it's astounding. You're one of the best writers on the archive and I can't wait to read more of this. :)

Author's Response:

Aw thanks! I was hoping not to make it sound too weird and out of place.

And you totally made me blush! You're the sweetest. :) 

Reviewer: Feedingmyaddiction Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Totally wasn't expecting Killer Miniature Spiderblobs. I woke my dog up from laughing at that. 

I think I am going to print out your story and show the hubby. THAT is a love note!! 



Author's Response: Ha! Thanks! :) I hope he enjoys it as much as you did.

Reviewer: SpunkyAR Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww...those were beautiful!! I can't wait for more. I hope Jim gets home safe. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm hoping to get the next batch up soon.

Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's a fun idea and somehow doesn't feel all that A/U. I hope to see more and I look forward to finding out what rank Dwight is.

Author's Response: Thank you, for your help, your encouragement and review. :)

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