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Reviewer: Night Swept Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 11:55 pm Title: A Reason

This is a really cool story.  It definitely fills a hole that the show never addressed.  For all her supposed shallowness I've always been a little moved by the scene where Katy grabs Jim's tie through her car window and looks at him so affectionately, and I think she didn't really get a fair shake, so you gave her a little well-deserved rounding out.  Nice job!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2006 06:11 am Title: A Reason

Very nice.  She did seem kind of too perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and responding!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2006 06:45 pm Title: A Reason

She probably regretted asking!  Hee.  But I'm glad there was more to his break up than his non-relationship with Pam.  Very interesting read! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I figure even if their breakup hadn't been triggered by Roy setting the date and Jim getting upset, it would have happened before long anyway. Come on, Jim with a cheerleader? ;)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2006 06:29 pm Title: A Reason

I like that we (the audience and Katy) got a little more closure here. While I like that Jim was a real dick to Katy (his anguish was palpable and it made it a very real moment), I think he would feel bad and try to fix it, at least a little bit. Great idea, fabulous execution!

Author's Response: I agree, his pain made his callousness very believable, but I don't think he could leave it like that in the long run. Thank you!

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2006 06:07 pm Title: A Reason

Ouch. Not sure if that made it better or worse for Katy. But, good idea and execution!

Author's Response: It probably hurts more, but is better as a learning experience. Maybe she'd be more mindful about being more real in future relationships?

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2006 05:06 pm Title: A Reason

Hah!  I'm sorry, but this really made me laugh, picturing Katy doing that.

Author's Response: It's certainly more than a little desperate!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2006 03:24 pm Title: A Reason

Interesting that his reason was about her and not himself! He's not really making it easier for her, is he?

Congrats on your first Office fic!



Author's Response: I think it was about both of them - her needing to project a certain image and him not being able to relate to her. Thank you!

Reviewer: MrsHalpert Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2006 02:24 pm Title: A Reason

great job for your first fic!! =) i loved it! it seemed like something katy would do -- make sure jim didn't see her without make-up. again, great job!! =)



Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I see her as being the type who's more interested in impressing him than being herself. Which is sad.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2006 02:12 pm Title: A Reason

Loved your story - great first Office fic. I love the reason Jim gave for the breakup, and the fact that Katie actually did that!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

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