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Reviewer: honeypioneer Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2008 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: Licorice is for Dummies...

This was really cute...I really enjoyed the dialog!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2008 07:15 am Title: Chapter 1: Licorice is for Dummies...

It's always nice to see a new author, Whitter, and I think you've done a good job with this first fic of yours. The dialogue is snappy, and you've given us a very sweet little vignette here. 

Hope to see some more from you! 



Author's Response: Thank you, Cousin Mose, for taking the time to read and feedback a newbie. It is much appreciated! :)

Reviewer: hues8 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2008 07:01 am Title: Chapter 1: Licorice is for Dummies...

So adorable. Just what we need to get us through the hiatus!

Author's Response: I really appreciate the review. Thank you!

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