1 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2024 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this.
1 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2020 09:36 am Title: Chapter 1
This is very well-written, feels very true to how they’d react to this situation, and it’s mind-blowingly sexy.
10 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2008 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very Nice. Poetic even. I re-read certain paragraphs over and over because they were so intense. I barely remembered what had happened in them. Like going into a trance. Very cool.
LOL when he said it was a freebie. Loved it.
Author's Response: thank you! I wondered if the "freebie" line was...awkward or something.
10 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2008 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Wonderful. That last line is killer.
Author's Response: Thank you! I can never end stories satisfactorily, so. :)
Date: June 08, 2008 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Uh, who cares where it came from? The important thing is, is that you just made my day! :)
Author's Response: Why thank you!
9 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2008 09:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Doesn't matter where it came from...do you think you can remember how to get back there? Well done, bigtunette. Very sexy.
Loved this: It’s a little funny, a little sad that all these big moments in her life take place in the most mundane places.
Author's Response: Sexy? Yooowza! Thanks!
Date: June 08, 2008 08:03 am Title: Chapter 1
um wow.. yeah... that's some good stuff.. sadly i miss the angst.. just a lil bit.. :$
Author's Response: Hah, I don't really miss it, but I can appreciate episodes like "Booze Cruise" and "The Merger" (both in my top 10) more because I know it turns out okay in the end.
10 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2008 05:57 am Title: Chapter 1
wow :) good good stuff. I like your take on what her mom's question is before "yeah, I think I am". I think you captured the "paralyzed" aspect of Pam really well here
Author's Response: Thank you! I still kind of think there are many other things her mom could have asked, but there's only so much you can do with a fic on that. But I considered it...