Date: June 14, 2008 09:24 pm Title: BFFs
Oh my god. I love your Kelly talking head!
and Micheal is acted exactly as Micheal would. "Friends don't let friends traitor one another" hahahahahaha. In fact all of the characters would definitely do and say everything you've written. I totally disagree with you, this chapter is gold! I thought it was very well choreographed. except maybe the Zohan movie reference, because judging by the commercials, I really don't believe that could possibly be funny. btw, I really love Josh and Natalie.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, Zohan doesn't look too entertaining to me either, but I'm really bad at keeping track of what movies are in theatres (I hardly ever go) and I've seen a billion commercials for that dang Zohan movie. Haha. rnI love writing Kelly. She brings out the inner valley girl in me. Fashion show! Fashion show! Fashion show at lunch! :)
Date: June 14, 2008 09:10 pm Title: BFFs
Holy frick, I used to effing love that show.
Sorry. Um, I'm sort of hyper, so I sort of freaked out when I saw that.
I really enjoyed this chapter. I can't wait to read mooorreeee! Especially with Jim and his possibly teaching career. Awesome.
Author's Response: Jim as a high school teacher! Can you imagine all the girls swooning over their English teacher? Ooh la la. ;) REBOOT!!!
Date: June 14, 2008 09:01 pm Title: BFFs
I have to say that I think Frisket would go 8-bit for you not mentioning him and giving the Guardian a nano ;-)
Yeah, the ReBoot shoutout totally warrented a comment (I love that show so much and remember watching marathons on Toonami), but so does this whole series...I really like the way you write the characters, especially Michael, Dwight, and Andy. Those three are so great.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the episodes. REBOOT!! Supposedly they really are making it into a movie. I cannot wait.
Date: June 12, 2008 07:49 pm Title: Putt-putt
Yay for Angela joining in on pranking Dwight! And I can't say I think Jim admitting his feelings about Dunder Mifflin and his future to Michael is the best idea when he doesn't have another job lined up yet and doesn't know how long he'll have to stick around, but I could see how admitting it might be a way to push him to actually make the changes.
Author's Response: Oh, poor Jim. He's still trying to figure out what he wants to do, but yes, I also believe him actually saying it will give him the extra initiative to actually pursue his career goals, and not just sit around, waiting for something to happen. :) Thank you for the review, Semby! I have a photo of the post-it prank that Angela joined in on in the last chapter. :)
Date: June 11, 2008 09:59 pm Title: Putt-putt
I was looking through stories today and was so happy when I found 2 new chapters (I've been slacking...I missed 2?!). This just made my day. Because of this series, I now ship two people who aren't even actually characters on the show. I love Natalie and Josh and how you put them in here so well!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the new characters. I was a little worried people wouldn't be open to a new couple, with the Jim and Pam romance kind of in the background as Pam finishes school in New York. Thank you so much for the kind review!
Date: June 11, 2008 06:07 pm Title: Putt-putt
What about hockey?
Not a real sport. Only Canada considers it a sport, and that's why Canadians are stupid.
Author's Response: I know, I'm so sorry! I promise it was Dwight talking in my head. For the record, I love hockey. And Canada! (Dallas Stars disappointed me this year, though.)
Date: June 11, 2008 03:47 pm Title: Cold Open
Okay, so. I've read all of your episodes, but never reviewed because I wasn't a member of the site.
But I decided I wanted to let you know how AMAZING I think these eps are. So. :)
Seriously, I basically check the site every day specifically to see if you have updated.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy reading them, because I'm having so much fun writing them. :)
Date: June 10, 2008 03:31 pm Title: That man is beardy
"Jim is leaving Dunder Mifflin to go find his true calling as a lumberjack. Because in order to sell paper, we have to have someone out there to chop down those trees." genious! Have I mentioned how much i love your Natalie character. Zooey Deschenel is awesome. Although... she doesn't really fit the description from your first epi. Michael thought she was hispanic. Oh well. I still love it all.
Author's Response: I know, I hadn't even thought of Zooey until I started writing the third "episode"... I couldn't think of another actress that would fit into that role that I could see on the show, and I love, love, love Zooey. Zooey with a slight tan? Haha. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: June 10, 2008 03:24 pm Title: Cold Open
I love happy Jim! OMG office singalong! This was perfect. you are perfect. I think you should send these episodes to the show, because seriously, they are perfect. You are my Favourite Author fo sho
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying the series. I totally had The Clash stuck in my head all day, and I just had to work it into the little script I was writing. I love having Jim start off a sing-a-long, instead of Andy. Aww for happy Jim!
Date: June 09, 2008 03:27 pm Title: Cold Open
Awesome beginning to what I'm guessing will be an awesome episode. You've got me on a new ship: Josh/Natalie, and I love seeing Jim happy! Add more as soon as possible please!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying them, thank you so much! I love writing Josh, and I hope to be able to include him in future episodes... without pushing out anyone in the regular cast, of course. :)