Reviews For Wonder
You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans
Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2008 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1

Holy crap, this is awesome. You've really got Pam's voice (at least as I imagined it). I loved every single word, but this took my breath away:

He leans against the doorframe, his arms folded casually across his chest. The towel around his waist hangs low, so I can see a thin strip of paler skin that hasn’t seen the sun in years. Now that I’m looking, it’s like I can’t stop.

He just watches me with a small smile on his face. I try to look away, try to act interested in something else, but it’s nearly impossible. His hair is damp and messy and I want to plunge my fingers into it. I know all it will take is a tug on that towel and he could be hard and hot against me, smelling gloriously clean, doing things to me that aren’t.

But he stays where he is. Almost like a dare. Or an invitation

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2008 04:45 am Title: Chapter 1

I read this when you first posted this, and I can't believe I didn't review! Thank you for enabling me in my attempts to live vicariously through Pam. Seriously, thank you. :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2008 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

I want a Jim JUST LIKE THIS ONE lol. Excellent as always. You = awesome

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2008 09:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Man, you write first perso Pam well. I love the fact she oogles on the sly. Even though she doesn't have to. And Jim's reaction. Haha. Love it.

Oooh, wanna know a funny story about invisible fences? We used one for years with my old dog. So when I got a new puppy, once she was old enough we put the coller on her. So she's running around, exploring the yard. She gets to the edge, it shocks her, and she jumps up, does a flip in mid air, gets so scared, runs right back inside. Was one of those times I just wanted to love on her and laugh at the same time. Even still, like 4-5 years later, she still is afraid to go anywhere close to the edge of the yard. Its like, run out, pee, run back inside. She's a silly dog.
Not that that has anything to do with Pam or Jim... oops.

I always wonder what his skin feels like. Not so much smell. But the feel. Is that weird? Eh, probably not here at MTT. Real life yes. So, keep those houghts to myself as I go out to lunch!

Lalalala skipping over everything thats weird for me to read (you see why I stick to mild or less).... but if Jim goes back to Stamford, I may have to kill someone...

Jim sings in the shower!

Reviewer: Sevian Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2008 03:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  Steamy, Hot, and Fantastic!  Great job! Thanks!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2008 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, yummy. I seriously don't blame Pam for checking him out so often ;) This was wonderful.

Reviewer: Aurorabee Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2008 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

"If I buried my face into his neck, would he smell like soap? Shaving cream? Sunshine? Hope?"

I love this. Love the whole piece, of course, but this just really resonated with me. Moved me.

I hope you're having a fantastic vacation and that you'll come back refreshed and ready to write! :-)

Reviewer: Talkative Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

“Were you reading one of your smutty novels while I was out?”

No, Jim. She was reading some of Wendolf's fic. Yowza. Oh, and -

"I was sure, in a way that made me breathless and squirmy inside, that he’d use it the way he did everything: cleverly and gently and subtly."

Jim Halpert in three adjectives.

I need a cigarette.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a send off for yourself! lol. This was outfreakingstanding. I've never wanted to be a fictional character so much in my life as I wanted to be Pam in this little gem. Kudos!

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Holy Hotness Fanfic Writer... this is awesome. Thank you for doing such a great job of describing how I feel, I mean Pam feels. I love when Jim says "shit" it just adds to his hotness.

This was so perfect, great visual: When he raised his arms above his head to put a dish back in a high cabinet I couldn’t reach, I’d covertly watch his t-shirt rise up to reveal a narrow strip of irresistible skin above his jeans.

Reviewer: honeypioneer Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

The details of this are just really wonderful and beautiful. And though it's no easy task, I really think you've captured Pam's "voice" dead on. First person is really difficult to accomplish, but you've definitely pulled it off. And I love that you incorporated the views without and without Pam's glasses...it's details like these that make you the fabulous writer you are! Wonderful job...have a great vacation :)

Reviewer: Annika Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wendolf!  What a beautiful story.  I love your version of first person.  Every word was believable and in character. 

I felt like a dog with the electric collar and invisible fence, who tries to wander off or roam further than he is allowed and gets stopped in his tracks by a sudden zap. A reminder. A reprimanding uh uh uh, that’s not where you’re supposed to be expressed in a less than subtle shock wave around his neck. That’s what my guilt felt like. I’d glance up at Jim, stare too long, start to think too much and then I’d suddenly realize what I was doing and ZAP. Back to reality. If I could pinpoint where the shock came from, I’d say the little metal collar around my ring finger. And I’d reluctantly return to where I had been trained to stay. Within my invisible fence.

Right on the money.  Describes it perfectly.

So many beautiful passages Wendolf.  Once again, you've raised the bar, my friend.  Thank you for this. :-)

Reviewer: efisher Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Superb, new while staying true to character.

Reviewer: bigtunette Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ohhh, this is wonderful. Extraordinarily hot, and not in an obvious way either.

Reviewer: jillyree Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good Lord, Woman! If this is what happens when you're about to go on vacation, I think you need to just retire and vacation all the time!

Can we get a ribbon for this woman and this story?  I have to actually to SLEEP after reading this?  WOW...just WOW!

Reviewer: Sharipep Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

yay! fabulous fabulosity as always. i loved the last paragraph & sentence. amaaaazing. just - wow. Great job!

Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is beautiful and so evocative. So many tangible details to even quote... great job!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ah.  I knew when I saw a Wendolf story that it would be great.  Really good first person story, this is!  I think this is very true – Jim would be far more comfortable with openly admiring Pam's body than vice versa.  I can't pick a favorite passage.  Love it all.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Brilliant. Sexy. Another glorious Wendolf work of art.

Back then I was as sneaky in my secret longing as I was resolute in my public choices. But I looked. Absolutely I did.

You are amazing, my friend.  Thank you for this.  Have a fantastic vacation.

Reviewer: standinginthedoorway Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

So I suck at constructive reviewing but this is fabulous!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for letting us live vicariously through Pam here - a better surrogate, we couldn't ask for ;-) And thank you for this grand tour of some of my fave 'parts'. Bonus points for managing to include the Pinewood Derby - you've done the cub scouts proud. Bon voyage!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Pam = #1 Hussy

Rest of Hussies sit behind Pam in a group nodding in agreement with Pam's observations.

Haha!  Another winner, wendolf.  And another "Jim in a towel" fic.  Impossible to have too many of those.  Nice addition to the "middle of the month" smutfest.

Reviewer: Abigail Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was so beautifully written.  I loved it!

Reviewer: Kate Shepherd Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh so good... I love seeing Jim and Pam together *sigh*

Reviewer: MintChocolateChip Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

You've done it again Wendolf...thanks for making me blush and smile.

You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans