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Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2006 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice job on the tension in the bedroom! Great!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2006 06:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Nicely done.  It is a very sexy pic of him.

Author's Response: Thank you and too true!

Reviewer: tlace Anonymous 8 [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2006 06:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely perfect!  I love your description of their interaction at Jim's, seriously, it is so them, the almost-going-to-happen moment.  Wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank you so much.  I really have nothing more than that - "so them" is such an amazing compliment.

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2006 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

all so real (and so hot!)--like the way you portrayed her inner thought process and her denial--it seemed very pam-like.

Author's Response: Ah, thank you, thank you

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2006 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Stupid Pam. This was fantastically real.

Author's Response: Thanks; I appreciate that.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2006 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1

I think you did a great job!  You managed to make it sexy and full of heat, which is hard to do.  Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks so much - very insecure.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2006 08:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Love, love LOVE this. So beautifully erotic - from the scene in his bedroom, to the scene at his front door, till the end.  Awesome job!



Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU.  I really appreciate that. 

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2006 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Would never have known this was your, ahem, maiden voyage into the steamy zone. Reads like the work of an old pro. Jim just seems to bring it out in a girl, doesn't he? Love that you provided the visual aid (I also posted a JAM  story a while back based on a photo of JF - never occured to me to link it until now! Very clever.)

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I felt kind of skeazy...although, I have no problem reading it - writing it seems different.  Ahh, Jim...yes he does bring it out in a girl. Yum.

Reviewer: tonightyourghost Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2006 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Um. First of all. That picture? Hottttttttttttt. Oh the beauty of John Krasinski.

She feels like a really bad person. <--- That's a huge part of Pam's ambivalent behavior regarding Jim - she doesn't want to feel like a bad person or do something that would make her seem like one. I enjoyed this. Poor Pam. 



Author's Response: Thank you very much.  Yes, that picture is just too...everything. 

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