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Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2008 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 3 Each moment felt like an eternity

thanks so much!

Reviewer: cantdenytruelove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2008 02:29 am Title: Chapter 3 Each moment felt like an eternity

Wow, that was beautiful! Wow....wow wow wow....

B.E.A.U-tiful

Reviewer: MelBal Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2008 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 3 Each moment felt like an eternity

I love this story. I've read it about 10 times. So tender, so sweet, so hot! I just love 'Jim the sex god'.

Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2008 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 2 "I want you to keep touching me"

pretty good work for your first fanfic for JAM.
one thing - you spelt 'Beesly' wrong. you spell it with an 'a' instead of a second 'e'. Just though i'd let ya know!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: MintChocolateChip Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2008 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 3 Each moment felt like an eternity

Whoooaaah. Nice. Thanks for that - well done! Extremely hot.

Author's Response: Thank you, that was what I was going for. So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2008 11:24 am Title: Chapter 1 Then it's a date

That was incredible.  I don't remember crying at anything that wasn't sad before this story.  It was beautifully written.

Author's Response: I was so touched by your review. Thank you so much. You cried? Even if you are just saying that, I am so flattered. You rock! I hope you keep reviewing my chapters. You totally made my day!

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25, 2008 10:49 am Title: Chapter 2 "I want you to keep touching me"

after finishing chap 3 get back to After the Fireworks

Author's Response: Thanks I heartstanley. I will promise!

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25, 2008 10:29 am Title: Chapter 2 "I want you to keep touching me"

Great Job!  Story got better as it progressed!

Very nice.

B



Author's Response: Thank you Batman I hope you will read the final chapter and tell me if you liked the progression up till the end.

Reviewer: cheezy316 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2008 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 2 "I want you to keep touching me"

Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you're exceited for the next chapter. I hope you'll let me know what you think of it.

Reviewer: MelissaKrasinski Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2008 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 2 "I want you to keep touching me"

I love your writing. I love it. I love you!
hahahaha. it's amazing.
POST CHAPTER THREE. I CANNOT WAIT. :D

Author's Response: Thanks You are so sweet. I reviewed your story in case you havent checked your reviews. I hope you write more. I would love to read the cloverfield twist.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2008 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1 Then it's a date

I really enjoyed this chapter.  Nice conversation and the dancing was sweet.



Author's Response: Thanks glad you thought so. I worry about trying to get them to speak in character. This felt like writng Dawsons Creek crossover fan fic because Pam and Jim usually aren't this verbose but it's what I wanted them to say.

Reviewer: MelBal Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2008 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1 Then it's a date

Bring on the romance/smut/fluff. It's been a long summer already!

Author's Response: I hope you continue to enjoy it. Please let me know what you think of the rest of the story.

Reviewer: bigtunette Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2008 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1 Then it's a date

So far, so good. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks I'' do my best to post soon. I have a lot of smut to edit.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2008 07:20 am Title: Chapter 1 Then it's a date

I'm in for more.

Author's Response: Im glad you're hooked already

Reviewer: drewbers Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2008 05:23 am Title: Chapter 1 Then it's a date

Well you peaked my interest. Now please go write more!

Author's Response: That's good. I hope you'll let me know what you thought of the other chapters as well.

Reviewer: Jinxcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2008 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 Then it's a date

Bring it on!!

Author's Response: Thanks Jinxcoke I hope I will not disapoint you.

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