7 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 03:42 am Title: Chapter 4
This is a very sweet story and I like that you've had Phyllis take a bigger role in the Jim/Pam situation. There are some grammatical issues scattered throughout that could probably use the attention of a beta reader; next time, feel free to ask someone on the beta list to read it through for you.
6 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
I think your story was good. Love Phyllis and her Jamming heart. I think having a beta reader may have helped some of your grammar/spelling issues. I'd be happy to do it for future stories.
Date: September 17, 2006 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
so cute. yay phyllis :) loved the note with the flowers at the end!
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
aw, that was so cute! i just love phyllis and the way she roots for them. i could totally see her doing this... i wish she would :)
8 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
That note at the end was so cute. Very sweet story.
7 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love the Phyllis character, and although it's barely hinted at on the show, I love the way fanfiction has made her the ultimate Jam cheerleader, and your contribution made for great reading.
9 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
Very sweet. I love Phyllis, and this seems very in character for her.
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yea for Phyllis! What a great line - "I married my Roy".
Date: September 17, 2006 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love fic that features Phyllis. You can tell she's rooting for Jam. Glad this isn't over, because I can't wait to see where you take it.