Date: January 28, 2007 03:34 pm Title: The Art of Forgetting
rain is amazing... good story. i love the rain... i want it to rain now.
8 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2006 09:03 am Title: The Art of Forgetting
Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
7 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 03:01 pm Title: The Art of Forgetting
Greast first attempt at writing Jam! I hope you'll be contributing more like this to the community in the future.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm currently working on another long story, but I always do little oneshots like this in between.
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 08:51 am Title: The Art of Forgetting
sweet
Author's Response: Thank you!
9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 03:54 am Title: The Art of Forgetting
They're so cute together. You capture that playfulness very well.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was worried that I wouldn't capture that so well, but.... phew. Good to know that I did! I really appreciate your review!
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 10:35 pm Title: The Art of Forgetting
Yay! I've been hoping someone would do a rain story! And let me just say that everyone was TOTALLY in character. Especially Michael! Good job!
Author's Response: I was so worried about people being in character, and I must say, I am so glad you thought they were! Thanks so much for your review!
7 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 07:09 pm Title: The Art of Forgetting
I noticed a few errors, but other than that I LOVED it. Such a cute story, I love the end as well!!
He glanced to the other wall, biting his lip, and for a moment, he swore, he could still taste the rain.
my favorite line, so cute!
Author's Response: Teehee. Thanks so much! I had so much fun writing this story, especially that last line. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
8 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 06:58 pm Title: The Art of Forgetting
Very sweet, and very in tune with the show.
One nitpick--I think you neglected to mention what, exactly, they put on Dwight's mat...
Author's Response: Ooops. They put Crisco on his mat. I got the idea from my lovely friends at www.theofficeforum.net. And thanks so much for your review!