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Reviewer: Jewelsy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2008 07:11 pm Title: Red Wine on their First Date

Nice story. Really good angsty moments you have there. I love Jim's half drunk smile and the omage to the glass being half full. I would love to read more. Please continue.

Reviewer: SheSays Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2008 04:04 am Title: Red Wine on their First Date

I loved this - especially considering I'm still desperately trying to seek closure (young British girl, 903 year old Timelord...and a half and half split who's not quite the same) Thanks for this story - perfect ending (unlike the ending of SOME stories I know.)

Reviewer: honeypioneer Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2008 03:09 pm Title: Red Wine on their First Date

Very cute...I like how not everything was perfect for them that first night. Good job, nice simplicity.

Reviewer: Jinxcoke Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2008 02:39 pm Title: Red Wine on their First Date

Very nice! Sweet and fluffy. Just the way I like it! Are you adding more?

Reviewer: flonkerton Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2008 02:06 pm Title: Red Wine on their First Date

I like first date fics where its not perfect and its a little awkward. It fits them so much better. I liked the simplicity of this.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2008 08:17 am Title: Red Wine on their First Date

Oh, I hope, hope, HOPE that you continue, shootingstars.  I so thoroughly enjoyed it.  I kept checking the scrollbar (or whatever it's called) on the right of my screen to make sure that there was more to read.  I didn't want it to end.  The dialog was spot on and lovely.  So many passages that I want to quote--such as this one:  “I am so sorry,” she whispers, clutching at his hand like it’s all that’s keeping her here, in the present with him, instead of back in the memories of those days without him. *sigh* Excellent job. 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2008 08:15 am Title: Red Wine on their First Date

quite lovely, SS. 

"You're messy. You're a klutz, you spill everything. And you leave the volume on the TV way too loud."  All kinds of possibilities there...

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2008 05:45 am Title: Red Wine on their First Date

I enjoyed this. You could add more chapters if you're inspired to do so, but either way, it's an enjoyable read as is.

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