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Reviewer: Abigail Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2008 07:14 am Title: First Day

"Um, yeah, hi, I'm Jim?  I'm new here?" 

LOVE the callback to The Merger.  Very cute.  I'm looking forward to your next first! 



Author's Response:

Hee hee!  Yeah, I kind of pictured that line in the merger to be an inside joke between Jim and Pam.

More is coming your way soon.  Thanks for the review Abigail!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2008 05:05 pm Title: First Day

The voice of Michael is perfect in this chapter.  Milkshake was the perfect painfully awkward yet funny choice.

Author's Response:

Thanks jinx!  I did a little research about hit songs in 2003 and trolled the list for something that Michael would love, but that would be highly inappropriate.  Score!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BlueBustyGal Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2008 01:11 pm Title: First Meeting

Bees ... I'm so excited for the future chapters! I always envision Jim as being incredibly gracious and sweet to strangers (calling the Hooters waitress by her name comes to mind) ... so I thought he was perfect in this. Kudos. I mean Zippity doo dah!

Author's Response:

Kudos and job well done for reading and reviewing, BBG!

I also have always envisioned Jim as a "give an old lady his seat" kind of guy, so I'm glad that translated.

Stay tuned for more!

Reviewer: Ollie Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2008 07:13 pm Title: First Meeting

So cute Bees! I love it! Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Thank you Ollie!

There's more cute and adorable JAM coming your way.

Reviewer: scrantonbranch Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2008 04:47 pm Title: First Meeting

Awww!  How cute!  I really like how you described Jim's mannerisms.  They are so him and so well written.  Can't wait to see what else you have hiding up your sleeve.

Author's Response:

Awww...thanks sb.  I've got lots of things up my sleeves, so I hope to see you back for more.

Thanks for reading and reviewing my friend!

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2008 01:29 pm Title: First Meeting

Cute!

Author's Response: Thanks!  More cuteness on the way soon.

Reviewer: Abigail Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2008 07:11 am Title: First Meeting

Awww, so sweet.  keep 'em coming!


Author's Response:

I like my JAM Sweet ;-)  More coming your way soon.

Thanks for reading and reviewing my friend!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2008 07:11 am Title: First Meeting

Great start, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing khand3stooges!  I'm hoping to do a chapter a week, so stay tuned.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2008 06:16 am Title: First Meeting

Aww, so cute : )

Author's Response:

Thanks NanReg.  Jim and Pam are adorable, aren't they.

There is more cuteness on the way!

Reviewer: kerber1920 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2008 05:55 am Title: First Meeting

I'm *OH* so very excited that you're writing again.  This is a great start, I love how you see that there is something there already ;) Thanks for having me in on the process!!  Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Thanks kerber!  Also, I forgot to thank you in my story notes for being my beta.  I appreciate you checking it over.

You will get to see the more first, my friend!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2008 05:29 am Title: First Meeting

WooHoo s new series from Bees!  What wouldn't I give to 'bump' into Jim :)

Looking forward to more. 



Author's Response:

Ha ha!  Yes, bumping into Jim Halpert would definitely be a highlight.

More coming soon and thanks for reading and reviewing!

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