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Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2008 12:38 pm Title: Thursday

You've done it again!  Great start, so full of feeling.  Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I swear to God it wasn't me... oh. Wait. Yeah, it was. :) Thanks, bitter.

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2008 12:01 pm Title: Thursday

It absolutely made my day to see you posted something new.  I cannot wait for more :)


Author's Response: Aw, shucks. Thanks, kells.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2008 11:36 am Title: Thursday

Wonderful to have you back, Talkative.  Experiment away!  This is  fine start, and, as impatient as I am, it's nice to have a "schedule" to look forward to.

Ah, where to begin...She would lie in bed that night, carefully recalling the way he would have hugged her or touched her hand before he left and the look in his eyes that she wasn't allowed to notice.  A fine example of Jim wearing his heart on his sleeve while Pam is in denial.  Love their kiss goodnight, too.  So awkward and sweet.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2008 11:15 am Title: Thursday

Yay!  FDF!  I got a little butterfly in my stomach with this.  Love how you've painted the tension, here.

Please, do amuse me while we wait for 9/25.



Author's Response: The timing of this, at least, was insipired by the FDF thread over on the boards. But I'm sure you've seen that already, right? Glad you liked it. More to come, of course.

Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2008 10:56 am Title: Thursday

This is a great idea! Something to look forward to every day. I love your imagery and the awkward/uncertain/hopefulness as they're starting out. Looking forward to the rest of the week!

Author's Response: Hey, callisto, thanks for your review and glad you liked it. It's a small start, but I swear I'm going somewhere with this.

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2008 10:52 am Title: Thursday

How about posting 3 chapters a day? Yes?

Author's Response: Judges? ... Oh, I'm sorry, Dunder, but the representative from Iceland is giving me the thumbs-down. One a day it is. But thank you for your enthusiasm. :)

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