Date: July 30, 2008 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
"Hong Kong Crap." That's hilarious. And BOY,this is a good story.
Author's Response: Hee. There is a Chinese restaurant here in town called Hong Kong Chef and my husband and I dubbed it Hong Kong Crap long ago. Love when I can use that stuff. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing -- glad you're enjoying it!
Date: July 30, 2008 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow..another review. I hope you aren't sick of me.
I just wanted to also say that this last flashback was the most depressing of them all. I can't even pick one or two lines that struck a chord - the whole passage is just so wonderfully written and painful.
It just really resonates for me. And, to get a bit personal, this is sort of what I'm going through a little bit right now. Watching a relationship just fizzle out and going through the motions, being too exhausted to fight for it, knowing that it isn't working, confusion as to how to fix it, fear of losing it. You've captured that so perfectly here.
It's sad to see them move in together like this- for most that would be a step forward, but here it's really a step backwards. This is them really giving up, isn't it?
Author's Response: Sick of you? Are you kidding me? I live to read such helpful and specific reviews! Keep 'em coming! Yeah, I totally agree that this flashback was the most painful. They both know there's a problem, but they haven't had the experience (or maybe been together long enough) to know how to fix it. I had someone ask me if I thought they were falling out of love and I said, No. They just are falling victim to the mistakes they've made in the past and continue to make. I think they love each other still . . . they just have no clue how to make it work on a practical level. Does that make sense? Anyway, thanks again. (So sorry to hear about your relationship, BTW. I've been there, and it sucks.)
Date: July 30, 2008 09:57 am Title: Chapter 8
ARGH it's just so painful and tragic. Stories like S3 and this one here should be a cautionary tale in what can happen when you aren't honest and open! another great chapter, wendolf!
Author's Response: Yup! Moral of the story is: REALLY try to be honest in relationships, even if it hurts. Thanks for reading and reviewing untherapy!
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2008 09:46 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow. Just wow. I am especially impressed by the how you have her responding to the show - it really resonated with me, the fact that's she torn between herself and Pam... Awesome.
I'll agree with everyone(?) about Pam's turnaround. Although we've already agreed that NY is just evil and this explains all sudden personality changes, reading this account gives me hope that the show writers won't pull a similar situation. BUT, it's a great story, and that justifies a little Jim paranoia and personality stretching!
Author's Response: Thanks untherapy! Everyone is so protective of Pam and her image -- I feel like I'm tarnishing it a bit (sorry Pam!). But I just want to keep reminding everyone that this story deals with Jim's POV, Jim's insecurities, Jim's issues. What he's attributing to Pam may be only partially true. Anyway, I'm glad you like it anyway, and am so appreciative of your reviews!
7 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2008 09:00 am Title: Chapter 8
this story is breaking my heart with the flashbacks...but i'm still loving it! looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. (BTW, the flashbacks kind of break my heart, too...) :-(
Date: July 30, 2008 08:24 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow...this is just so heartbreaking. As much as I love Pam, her silence the summer before and during S3 just infuriated me. It's so sad to read that Jim couldn't get past that part of his pain. And his doubt as to whether her love for him was a more a response to his - just heartbreaking. This all plays so much into why he couldn't bring himself to propose - the nagging doubt.
But can I just say how bad I feel for Pam the character - in the same way you had to stretch for the sake of your story, I think the writer's had to draw out her cowardice for the sake of their TV season. So I had to give her a pass. But I totally understand fictional Jim's problems with her.
Love how unburdened the beginning of his relationship with Emily is. And his windering how she will react to the dvd's is adorable.
Lovely.
Author's Response: Great point, zeebee. I think you're totally right that TO writers did play up Pam's cowardice a bit and it blows that Jim had to suffer because of it. (I guess Pam had to suffer, too.) And I was TOTALLY infuriated by Pam's silence after she called off her wedding. Talk about suspending disbelief for a moment! I swear -- to this day that makes absolutely no sense to me whatsoever (and actually makes me feel like my story isn't much of a stretch after all!). Anyway, thank you so much for continuing to read and review!
Date: July 30, 2008 07:25 am Title: Chapter 8
Wendolf, I am really enjoying (sometimes painfully) "Jim's" insight into his relationship with Pam, as well as his thought processes and motivations. Waiting anxiously (but in a good way)...
Author's Response: Glad you're still hanging in there Nan! It's a precious sort of pain, isn't it? Thanks for continuing to review!
Date: July 30, 2008 07:23 am Title: Chapter 8
This is soooo good- I am feeling Jim's POV! So liked "But the fear of losing me was never enough of a motivator to get her to do much more than tell me she missed me in front of our coworkers" part. Yea, So True! Sorry, people, but i ALWAYS thought Pam was such a coward-She KNEW Jim had a crush on her, that she was unhappy with Roy and she STILL said yes, i am going to marry Roy! ARGH!
Oh, and yes, steam with Emily is totally acceptable--Hey, JimSteam is JimSteam!! Hubba-hubba!!
I am hooked on this story, so have your way with me-Wendolf I am yours....
Author's Response: Word, JamFan4000. I'm a well documented Jim apologist so it's no surprise to some that I feel this way, but I was like "eh" at Pam's beach speech. Just didn't do it for me. IMO, she's lucky that Jim figured out what she really meant and came back. (I still love Pam, though -- in spite of and because of all her flaws). Thanks for reading and reviewing -- I'm so glad to have you hooked!
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2008 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Re: your comments at the start of chapter 8 -
I've had two major relationships in my life. One ended because of some massive emotional/intellectual changes that were sparked by higher education. The other has only gotten better as he and I have gone to school/branched out/explored our individual interests. Because of these experiences, I am completely able to buy Pam and Jim going either way (though it would kill me if you're prognosticating here). Unfortuately, I think Jim's assessment in this chapter of Pam's inability to put herself out there during S3 is absolutely correct (and wonderfully written, btw). It's one of the less appealing (yet totally understandable) aspects of her character.
Keep going. It's delicious torture.
Author's Response: Talkative -- sounds like our relationship histories are similar ;-) Maybe that's why I can see this story playing out like it does, even if it is a bit of a stretch for some. Anyhoo, Pam's inability to put herself out there for Jim is personally MY biggest problem with their relationship (and Pam specifically), and perhaps that's what feeds my energy to write this story. I just never saw them deal with all that season 3 hurt (I know a lot of people think Jim was douche-y during season 3, but I have never blamed him one iota. That guy was in serious self-preservation mode.) And if they never dealt with with the hurt/guilt/confusion/etc. up front, out loud . . . that could lead to some serious sh*t down the road (i.e. this story). So . . . let the torture continue. ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: July 30, 2008 12:17 am Title: Chapter 7
Wendolf,
You are one of my absolute favorite authors on this site. I couldn't bring myself to read this before today, b/c of the subject matter. I'm one of those people that has a hard time separating reality and fiction when it comes to Jam. I don't love that you've had to travel over to the dark side, but since I find your writing irresistable, I gave in and read.
I have to concur with a previous reviewer, though, I really feel like I am betraying Pam by enjoying this.
I really, really like Emily. I love how Jim is falling in love with her - it feels gentle and easy. I love her reaction to the videos, by the way. The fact that her initial reaction is one of compassion, rather than jealousy really is so endearing. I like that maybe she can be the one to take care of Jim this time and help him heal. If Pam and Jim don't make it, I really hope that he would have a second chance at love like this. And Pam, too.
I’m torn about Pam. I just deleted my initial review b/c I reread the flashback scenes and think that my initial balking at how you wrote Pam was unwarranted. Part of me still doesn’t accept Pam’s changes and really, I kind of hate that she seems so fundamentally different. Especially seeing how happy she was with Jim at the end of S4. When she looks up at him right before the almost-proposal at the fireworks, you know she is totally in love with Jim. To become so distanced in 12 weeks in NY just doesn't sit well with me. I get the whole "she's going off to college" reasoning. But, she's not 18. She's pushing 30 and spent all of S3 on her own figuring out who she was. I can't see 12 weeks in NY altering all of that. I almost wish that you had taken this even more AU and got Jim and Pam together early S3 - I think it would have been easier to accept Pam's transformation knowing that this was really her first time on her own.
But then I also think about the excitement of being at Pratt, though - especially having girlfriends for the first time and having the freedom to do something she loves. It would be realistic for her to maybe resent what Scranton, not Jim, represents - all those years wasted? And also for that to really scare Jim.
There is a scene from an episode in S2 where Jim talks about what he likes about Pam - her warmth, humor, that she's easy to talk to. I think these qualities are fundamental to who Pam is. She's being written in such a different way here though. I don't recognize her as Pam in many of these passages - she feels more like Karen. Especially in this last scene where she looks at Jim with pity when he says he doesn't like his job. I’m wondering if this has more to do with the distortions in Jim’s perceptions of Pam - is this his insecurities getting the better of him? The thing is is that I love Pam as much as Jim, maybe more. It really pains me to see Pam so changed, especially when Jim is still so loveable.
Also, the whole engagement delay - not buying it. I know this has been said before, but maybe if Jim hadn't said anything about it to Pam, I could have taken that leap. But in my mind, once Pam told him she didn't want to wait, I can't see Jim backing off. I think it would have hurt Pam too much and I cannot see Jim knowingly do that. Curious to see how you write Pam's thoughts on that.
Despite these reservations, I am enjoying the story of Emily and Jim. Wierd, right? If you weren't such a gifted writer, I don't think I would be able to stick with this.
One plea - can Pam find someone really wonderful too? I need my Pam to be happy. It will hurt me less. Pretty please?
Author's Response: zeebee, thank you so much for your wonderfully detailed review. I just love the specifics, especially the parts of the story that cause you to go "huh?". Totally get what you're saying (see my chapter notes for chapter 8), but I wanted to add one thing: I'm not sure how much Pam REALLY changed during season 3. I think we were supposed to believe that she figured out who she was, but I think she barely scratched the surface. Even at her most brave moment (on the beach), she was still sort of cowardly. So she definitely started the transformation, but (in my eyes) I don't think she really got a taste of what could be until a) she started dating Jim and b) she went to Pratt. But that's just my opinion of course ;-). (Plus, as I just said to a reviewer below: Pam "missed" most of her 20s while she was with Roy. I think she seemed more 30s-ish then than she probably does now! Age is more than a number -- it's a state of mind.)
You might be right about the convo with Jim and his job being a bit out of character... maybe she seems a little condescending there. But I really think most of that interpretation is coming from Jim's POV. Maybe Pam is just giving him a gentle nudge and he takes it as exasperation. (I think Pam has been shut out of his dreaming in the past -- example, her "Oh Boy" after their Philly Jim conversation in Local Ad -- and maybe his "you're enough for me" attitude is getting a little old?)
Lastly, re: the non-engagement. Personally, that's the hardest thing for me to buy, too. It would be hard to imagine him waiting, especially since he bought the ring after a week, right? But I keep thinking that when Pam returns from Pratt sort of changed, maybe he's waiting for a sign from her that tells him "Okay, ask now" and he's not feeling it and then all of his insecurities rear their demonic heads and . . . well, you can see where I'm heading. Anyway, thank you sooo much for your reviews. They help a ton. (And Pam will be just fine -- don't you worry!)
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2008 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. I love that it is something different and imaginative and still believable. I can't wait till you update more (and more and more and more).
Author's Response: Thanks LGT! So glad you're enjoying and thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2008 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
Okay this is getting hard to read now. But I can't stop. You've written something totally believable here. Jim was absolutely correct to give Em the DVDs, for the reasons that he did. And Em's reaction to season 2? I'm afraid to see how she'll react to season 3! Pam's growth from her summer in NY is believable too. Making friends; knowing for certain that she absolutely can do anything she wants to with her life. Jim starting to get insecure because of the changes in Pam. Damn you, wendolf; I wanted to be mad at Pam. But I can't. And that's because of your excellent writing. Good work here. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks Cheeb! I'm glad you find it believable -- I know to some it's a bit of a stretch, but I do know for a fact that true love does not always solve the pesky problems of poor communication and horrible timing (which these two have in spades). And you've pinpointed how I feel about Pam's summer -- I totally think it's like a teenager going off to college and just going "Wow . . . this is different. And I like it!" Plus she spent all those "fun" years in her 20s with Roy, so . . . maybe she's feeling like she missed out (ooooh, foreshadowing!). Anyway, thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: July 29, 2008 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey wendolf. I've been reading this all along and have yet to leave a review and I felt bad about that. I wavered with myself whether or not to click the link and read because I know I don't particularly care for "sad" endings and the thought of Jim and Pam not ending up together makes me want to jump off the nearest balcony. But I know you're such a great writer and that would be stupid of me to miss out on this.
You have such a great grasp on Jim's voice and character. It feels real and like someone else said in a review, I was kind of happy he was okay and able to move on with his life post-Pam. Emily is a fun character, too. I like how you have sections from her POV. It helped me sympathize with her.
But, I do have to say that Pam is coming off a little out of character. I think while she does have dreams of a career in graphic design and living in a big city, deep down she is just a small town girl who wants to get married (ahem...to some guy whose name rhymes with Tim) and have a family. So, it's hard for me to disregard that. It's also hard for me to think back on the season four scenes with these two at their happiest and think that it didn't work out for them. To think that Pam has changed so much that she doesn't want Jim in her life anymore (and vice versa). I know it happens in real life all the time but part of me thinks that it's just not possible for it to happen for these two. As cheesy as that sounds.
That being said, it's still an engrossing read and while I can't say that it's super enjoyable to read, I will say that I am interested to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: Your thoughts re: Pam's sudden shift have been echoed by others here as well, and I totally see what you're saying. It is hard to imagine her going from "Yay! Jim's going to propose!" to the picture I've painted. It's definitely a pretty major stretch. But I'll tell you what I've told them . . . I had to force it along a bit. Perhaps I sacrificed a bit of reality in favor of a quicker moving storyline. I didn't want them to get engaged because I didn't want either of them (especially Pam) to have to call off a wedding. And the only way for them NOT to get engaged is to have them grow apart somehow. And even though I've been heavy on the Pam growing apart side of things, I think Jim is feeling it, too.
I do have one argument, though, for Pam's sudden transformation, and it's a personal one. I went through a similar thing myself in my 20s, brought about by a change of surroundings and prospects for my future. And I took much of my confusion out on my then boyfriend (now wonderful husband). I was confused and overwhelmed and wondered if there was something (not necessarily someone) different out there for me. Lucky for me, my guy stuck with me through it and we've had a great relationship ever since. But that was some rough going for awhile there and if he had given up? I might have given up, too. I'm not saying that's how it's going to go in this story . . . just pointing out that I know from experience that things can sometimes change on a dime, even in a love fest like Jim and Pam.
O...kay. Now that you know WAY more about my private life than you ever wanted to know... thank you so so much for your review. I truly appreciate your honesty and very constructive thoughts.
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2008 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh Wendolf. Wow...just, wow.
First, I realize how hard this was for you to post this story, and I really applaud your efforts. It's not easy to go against the grain, so to speak, and I admire you telling the story you want to tell, regardless of what people want this story to be.
It's interesting, also - to see how an outsider can look at Jim and Pam the way we have seen them, and try to be objective about their feelings for them. I can only imagine how conflicted Emily is - seeing Jim so heartbreakingly in love with Pam, and wanting him to have her love him back, but yet wanting to be with him (did that make sense?). It's not an angle that is often (if ever?) explored, and I really love your take on it.
Regardless of the ending - you've taken great care with the characters here, and I love them both, so I really appreciate that. Of course, like everyone else hope that things don't go down like this in the "real" office universe, but I think I can handle reading a story such as this when such a talented writer is the one handling it.
Great job. I realize that at times you've been bummed about the response you've received, but you should keep your head up because you're a good writer, and even though this story hurts my heart a little bit, it doesn't mean I can't appreciate it for the wonderful job that you're doing.
Author's Response: Ah, kells . . . that's the kind of response I love to hear. I certainly didn't expect people to jump for joy over the premise of this story, but I was hoping there would be an audience of open-minded folks who could appreciate it for what it is: a totally fictional story based on totally fictional characters (what?! they're fictional???). And that is exactly what I've seen, for the most part. I'm thrilled with the response I've been getting as of late -- constructive criticism (especially re: Pam's quick turnaround at Pratt, which I realize is a stretch), such nice comments about my writing, and the willingness to suspend "reality" for a minute and enjoy (is "enjoy" the right word?) a different kind of story. So thank you, thank you, thank you for appreciating what I was trying to do. And for taking the time to leave me your comments!
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2008 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
Well, I think this is superb and smart and convincing as hell. Fuck the peanut gallery. 10!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Shassafrass! That was an awesome review! Glad you're enjoying it.
Date: July 29, 2008 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
I have to say that in spite of myself I am curious to see where this story goes. I am so totally JAM committed that the idea that they don't make it devastates me. It's not that I don't like Emily (I didn't hate Karen either) but for me Jim and Pam are each other's destiny.
With that being said, Jim deserves to be happy, and should Pam screw that up yet again, then he should be with someone who can do that. There is nothing worse than sad Jim. (OK, I do know they're not real, but you know how it is, right?)
Author's Response: I'm with ya' -- I didn't hate Karen either, but she stood in the way of Jim and Pam (although they stood in their own way even more). But Emily? I look at her as an innocent bystander. ;-) Thus, easier to like. And just so you know . . . I'm not sure who is ultimately going to screw things up: Jim or Pam. They both are equal partners in their downfall. It seems like Pam is getting more of the blame now, but Jim's time will come. And believe me . . . I absolutely do know how it is (re: them not being real). They are totally real to me some days. jkfan9989, thanks so much for giving this story a chance. I know it's hard for a JAM fan to read, but I hope you'll enjoy the completely fictitious ride.
Date: July 29, 2008 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm dying to know what happens next. I've been thinking about this story all day, and was so excited to get home and see their was an update!
Amazing, as usual. I'm this stories #1 fan.
Yeah, don't even challenge me.
Author's Response: Yay! My story (which was the ugly stepsister for awhile yesterday) officially has a #1 fan! :-) I love to know that you've been thinking about my story -- that is so flattering and just . . . amazing. Thank you. Glad you are enjoying it so much.
Date: July 29, 2008 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow. I am really identifying with Jim right now. Hm. Maybe that's why I love him!
I really like how Emily is torn!
Author's Response: Thanks so much feedingmyaddiction! Yeah, I totally identify with Jim, too. He's just . . . mmmm. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2008 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm still in thrall, wendolf. I, too, (from personal experience) believe there's more than one person out there for everybody, and Emily is such a great example of new possibilities.
I only have one small problem with the realism of all this, which is how fast and completely one summer changed how Pam thinks about what she wants. My first thought was "but...but...Pam talked about starting a family!" However, I am perfectly willing to set that aside to see where you take this. Your voice for Jim is so perfect and believable that I just have to!
Favorite lines (in some cases, paragraphs):
He smelled good and tasted good and felt good beneath my hands.
I’m sure when it was filming, he felt like he was doing a good job at camouflaging his emotions, hiding what he felt. But onscreen his expressive face gives him away every time. The camera holds on him for a moment longer than absolutely necessary to catch him when he’s vulnerable. It is merciless during those one-on-one interviews, refusing to be fooled by his practiced attempts at indifference. What wasn’t obvious to him (or to Pam) at the time is completely obvious to anyone watching, and I’m sure he feels vulnerable and exposed and embarrassed, now, knowing that he wasn’t fooling anyone.
And this, especially:
I started to wonder if having kids was negotiable to me. Could I be happy as the childless, average husband of a driven career woman? Wasn’t that where I had been heading with Karen?
I wanted the house with the yard, the kids, the soccer practices and the summer evening trips to Dairy Queen. My career was secondary to all that.
So true to character! These things have been obvious about Jim from the beginning. Maybe I was just a different partner in the same unappealing scenario that felt like someone else’s dream and not hers.
It's times like these I have to remind myself these are all fictional characters... (right?)
Author's Response: Wow, callisto, thanks for all the specifics. What I love about people giving specifics is that what people like and what you think they'll like are not always the same thing. And often a line that you threw in on a whim ends up being someone's favorite. It's so cool. Anyway, thanks so much. As for your problem with Pam changing so fast and that it would cause such a deep chasm between Jim and Pam so quickly -- I agree, it's a stretch. I don't completely buy the timing of it either (and it's my fic!). But as you know, when you have a fic premise, you kind of have to work within the boundaries of the show a bit. Also (as I've said to previous reviewers), I didn't want them to get engaged before Pam left for Pratt (because I knew I was going to have them break up) and I had to find a way to KEEP them from getting engaged for months (so that neither of them would have to call off a wedding). So . . . suspended reality time! But I hear what you're saying and I don't disagree. I'm just s-t-r-e-t-c-h-i-n-g for the sake of my fic. ;-) Anyhoo, thanks SO much for the review! Glad you are enjoying it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2008 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow I am totally in love with this story. So many wonderful angles and ideas going on here. Please keep the updates coming!
Author's Response: And this story is in love with you, Mutey. (Anyone who gave this one a chance deserves some love...) Thanks for reading and reviewing -- it's so appreciated!
Date: July 29, 2008 11:24 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow. Just. Wow. This is the BEST of the reminiscences so far! I love how conflicted Jim is about being happy for Pam yet jealous at the same time. How he wonders how her new friends view him -- is he just he new Roy? The concept that Pam was really balking at the whole traditional marriage idea and not just at neanderthal Roy.
And, wow! Emily! Wow! Gotta love that girl!
How can I want him so much for myself and yet my heart breaks that he’s not with her?
Great, great, great story, wendolf!
Here's your star rating:
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Author's Response: Totally, VB. Can't you just see Jim wanting to be happy for Pam, knowing he should be, but just hating that he feels somehow squeezed out of her life a little bit? I've seen this kind of thing happen quite often in real life and it's so hard. Self doubt just sort of creeps in from all sides. And so glad you like Emily! She's fun, huh? Thanks for the gazillion stars -- made my day!
Date: July 29, 2008 11:06 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow, I am really liking Emily. And these flashbacks are heart breaking. Keep up the awesome work.
Author's Response: Yay! I was so hoping Emily would become someone people could root for. Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2008 10:57 am Title: Chapter 7
I'll start by saying that I am not one to write an eloquent review. Usually, I'll just say a few words (and, I'm usually at work when reviewing!). That being said, this story is the first fanfic that I've ever dreamed about! Seriously, I started reading yesterday and I couldn't stop thinking about it then I dream about it last night!
What I'm trying to say (without sounding like a crazy fic stalker) is that the plot you've woven and the characters you've brought to life are beautiful, flawed, believable human beings that are a pleasure to read about. You should be very proud of this story. I know it sure keeps me entertained at my boring job! :-)
Author's Response: OMG, Salame! I made you dream about Philly Jim?! Awesome. And don't worry -- you're not a crazy fic stalker. I've been known to get sucked into a fic to an unhealthy level (yes, I'm looking at you and your "Famous", Stablergirl). Thanks so much for all your wonderful comments. I'm glad I can keep you entertained at work ;-)
Date: July 29, 2008 10:56 am Title: Chapter 7
Emily is addicted to watching Jim! (Who isn’t?) Even though Emily has fallen for Jim, I love that she is able to see past that and see how much Jim really loved Pam. It’s a unique situation she is in, watching the man she likes in love with someone else. But I think you write her with integrity and compassion. She seems to be a strong, centered and secure lady. Which I think is the perfect fit for Jim in this story. Jim/Pam: Dairy Queen! That was my family’s dessert last night. Very suburban visual of a family. And who doesn’t want Dairy Queen for dessert? Jim’s insecurity about his future w/ Pam is difficult to read but you have made a very plausible scenario. Three months in NYC could most definitely change Pam for the better and the worse. And unfortunately it appears that Jim may not fit into Pam’s new life.
Author's Response: Yeah, I could almost picture Emily getting sucked into Jim and Pam's story, just like we all did. Can you imagine being the one to date him after Pam? Yikes. Talk about a tough act to follow... And I'm totally with you on the DQ! That's one of our favorite stomping grounds.
Yeah, Jim's struggling is hard to watch, but I think he's going to come to some realizations, soon. Hopefully it all won't be too painful... Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Alamos!
Date: July 29, 2008 10:15 am Title: Chapter 7
This is really interesting and different. I like it so far.
Author's Response: Thanks bright_lights_4. It's definitely different. Glad you like it!