Reviews For Through My Eyes
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Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2022 10:44 am Title: Chapter 10

So I was really sad reading the first lines of this chapter. It can be really hard when you don’t get to be in class with your friends. I remember my son going through this, shortly after we had moved and my heart broke just for him. This passage brought that to mind.

And then wow, a 4th grade/season 3 mashup. You did a good job repurposing the things like her staring at his neck, Phyllis getting married and the heartbreaking chewing gum share.

And looks like we are heading to a Roy/Pam pairing that while not the couple I want to see will make things interesting for the upcoming chapters.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2022 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 10

Phyllis as their teacher SHOULD be a lot of fun. Everyone's growing up a little, should heighten the tension...

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