Reviews For First Kisses
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Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2010 06:31 pm Title: First Kisses

Oh my goodness, that was beautiful! Sometimes the dialog can be unbelievably unrealistic, but this was just perfect. Fantastic job! I think this is my favorite proposal story, not just choosing a different night or continuing to propose at the office, but going somewhere else, somewhere equally important to their relationship. I just can't say enough how Jim's words were so beautiful. I want somebody to say that to me!

Alright, with this happy image in my mind, I will keep doing my homework. Sadly. But happily with this image in my brain. Great job yet again!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2008 10:46 am Title: First Kisses

Very romantic!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2008 08:53 am Title: First Kisses

There's always room for more engagement fic when it's a lovely as that!  The imagery was just dripping with emotion.  From the streetlight/spotlight to Pam crying out the past, it was engrossing and engaging and a much better ending than we were given.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2008 06:35 pm Title: First Kisses

This proposal was much better than one in the parking lot would have been.  So sweet and romantic. I just love JAM love.

Reviewer: mapetiteange Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2008 03:26 pm Title: First Kisses

very well written.
poetic, even.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2008 02:20 pm Title: First Kisses

We can never have enough 'right the wrong' proposal stories.  Gah!  I want to see what happened!  Come ON 9/25 already!

(Nice job, BTW). 

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2008 12:04 pm Title: First Kisses

Great! 

B

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2008 11:14 am Title: First Kisses

This was beautiful. I'm choosing to believe that this really happened after Toby's party. (At least until season 5 starts.) :) Truy enjoyed this.

Reviewer: cri-man-squa Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2008 08:15 am Title: First Kisses

That was perfect. It just may have been the highlight of my day. :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2008 08:07 am Title: First Kisses

I so enjoyed this.  It gave me chills.  Such a sweet, heartfelt proposal.  Great job. 

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2008 06:37 am Title: First Kisses

Aww, beautiful and sweet!

Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2008 04:11 am Title: First Kisses

Thanks for this...I really needed it. There are just so many gloom and doom stories posting right now and this was a breath of fresh air!

Reviewer: Pisa Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2008 03:16 am Title: First Kisses

To quote a beloved tv-character "You really brought out the big guns". That was awesome. You're writing is beautifully poetic and I loved the plot. I can imagine Jim doing something like that.

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