Date: September 13, 2008 08:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Why must you break my heart? It is way to early in the morning for sadness.
If anything similar to this (or more what it implies) happens, I shall hurt you.
Author's Response: Sorry, sorry! You know me...I'm about 99% full of fluff but sometimes one of these little bits of angst pops out. I'm so glad you're back. Please don't hurt me.
Date: September 04, 2008 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Very sad, but well written. I agree that new relationships are going to have that trust issues to work through. I think you covered that really well with this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It was just a sort of sad little idea that popped into my brain. Thank you for taking the time to read it and leave a comment.
Date: September 04, 2008 07:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I think one of the nice subtle things about this is the truth about the beginning of a relationship. Sure, there's the whole "a cheater always cheats" element. But moreso there's the unsureness and lack of trust that you can't have when you're first starting out. So hurtful things are said and done.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, I think they would have had a lot of that to work out, after the rocky start they got. Thank you very much for your beta skillz, and for taking the time to comment! You know I appreciate it!
Date: September 03, 2008 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is very well written and it is easy to believe that they could have this type of exchange before she leaves. Though I hope that this isn't how she leaves...
I hope you write a 55 word sequel, maybe showing us what happens in autumn.
Author's Response: Thank you! I usually write fluff, but when I get a less-happy idea I usually have to write it out of my system. That's the case here; I don't really think it would happen this way, but it could. I really, really appreciate you taking the time to comment, thank you!