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Reviewer: MintChocolateChip Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2008 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 2

Yes -- I like it! Thank you for writing, very entertaining. This is making me hanker for some Disney World. I am enjoying the Judy character. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hanker for the home of the Mouse non-stop so this was a good outlet. :) Glad you're enjoying Judy, and hope you continue to enjoy the story! :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2008 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

Very cute, LC.  Again, love the visuals.  

I’m not sure we even need a guide; I know plenty about Disney World. Captain EO, Mr. Toad’s Wild Ride, 20,000 Leagues Under The Sea – I know all the best rides.  Poor Michael--I think he's going to be disappointed when he sees his favorite rides are no longer in service. 

You're doing a fine job at capturing the characters' voices.  Unfortunately, I wasn't able to access Jim's vacation playlist.  The link took me to MTT's home page. 



Author's Response: Thanks Nan! Poor Michael indeed...the man can't avoid a power struggle. I'll get that Jim playlist link fixed for Chapter Three - thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: babaganoosh Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2008 11:07 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm very excited to continue reading this story! My husband and I take our kids to Disney World every year and we love it. And to read about Jim and Pam at Disney will be fun!!

Author's Response: Oh, if you and your husband ever have room for one more, I'm always free! I can get my hubby to agree to once every two and a half years, max. That's something. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2008 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Little Comment, I'm psyched to read more of this.  I am a total Disney dork *blushes*  And visuals!  PLUS it makes me even happier to hear that you've already finished.  Waiting...

Author's Response: Whoa, Nan, let's all agree here and now that NO ONE has to be embarrassed about being a Disney fan here. You will soon see what a nutjob I am about it. Thanks for coming back for another (literal) journey with me!

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